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Betrayed Love Introduction
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"Kim I have some great news" said Kim's best friend Angela
"Oh yeah what is it?" asked Kim
"Jake proposed to me!!!!!!" Angela screamed
"Oh my gosh really" Kim asked
"Yes come over to his house tomorrow for the engagment party. I need my best friend there" said Angela
"Of course I'll be there" said Kim
"Alright than bye" said Angela
"bye" said Kim
Kim was so happy that her friend was getting married. You see Angela wasn't really the kind of person who gets a guy like that.
Next Day
Kim got into her best blue dress that was strapless and let her long black hair down. She put on some jewlary and a bit of makeup and went down and got into her car. Soon she arrived at Jake's house and went in.
"Kim" said Angela with a huge smile on her face "Come meet Jake's friend"
"Oh hi Kim so glad you could make it" said Jake
"Congratulations Jake" said Kim smiling
"Thanks Kim I would like you to meet my friend Nick" said Jake
"Its nice to meet you.... KIM" said Nick wwith a surprised look on his face
"Nick is that you" said Kim running and hugging him
"Yeah its me" he said
"You both know eachother" asked Angela and Jake at the same time.
"yes you see Nick was my childhood friend we used to do everything together" said Kim
"Yes untill I moved to New York" said Nick
"I thought I would never see you again" said Kim with a bigger smile than before.
"Well here I am" said Nick
When Kim and Nick were little Kim had a mayjor crush on him but unsure if Nick felt the same. She was going to tell him one day untill she found out that he had moved with out saying goodbye. Kim was devastated. But maybe just maybe she could be with him forever now that she has found him. Oh but Kim had no idea what kind of a betrayle lay in her future for her.
WELL THATS IT. I HOPED YOU LIKED IT. IT MAY HAVE BEEN BORING BUT IT WILL GET BETTER LATER TRUST ME. PLZ TELL ME WAT U THINK AND RATE OH AND i WILL STILL BE WRITING IM IN LOVE WITH MY BEST FRIENDFOR ALL THE PEOPLE WHO READ THAT STORY.
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| On February 20th 2008 cashy31196 Said : | |
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getting intestering... keep writing this story. KMP plz |
| On February 18th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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This is great! Keep me posted! |
| On February 18th 2008 icewillow13 Said : | |
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i like it! please kmp |
| On February 18th 2008 cassorino Said : | |
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I really like it so far
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| On February 18th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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kmp plz! |
| On February 18th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On February 18th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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OMG! I wonder what'll happen next?? Please kmp :) |
| On February 18th 2008 vollygal456 Said : | |
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wow its good keep keep keep it up!!!!!!!! wooooooh!!!!! |
| On February 18th 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said : | |
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its good so far |


