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Romance Created on 12-5-07 Views(214) Story Rating G

At school in math class.

"Hey Rose" Emilio said to me.

"Yeah" I asked looking into his brown eyes which made me melt.

"Do you wanna go to the park today" he asked me

"yeah" I said smiling

"Ok see you there at 4" He said smiling also

At the park at 5:00

"We have been here for an hour now" I said

"Man and I thought he liked you" said Jackie

"oh well lets go" I said madly

"Ha ha he stood you up he stood you up" said Jackie

"Ok Jackie lets go now"I said getting more and more pissed by the second.

"He stood you up he stood you up" said Jackie singing

I couldn't take it anymore I just exploded

"OK JACKIE AND GET THE GOD DAMN FUCKING POINT YOU DON'T HAVE TO RUB IT IN MY FACE" I said getting really really pissed. my face was red like a cherry.

"Whatever why are you getting so pissed at" she said

"just never mind ok" I said cooling down a bit.

"oh you actually thought that you had a chance with him" she asked

"Well yeah" I said

"hahahaha are you serious. You actually thought that he liked you" she said laughing so hard that she almost fell on the ground.

"Well what about those things that you were telling me like how he tried to impress me" I asked

"I just said that so you would feel that someone actually liked you" she said snickering.

I couldn't say a word so I just ran home crying. I locked myself in my room and cried.

 

hoped you liked it. sorry it took so long to post I had to get some things done plz rate and comment

 

 

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On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess wow that B_I_T_C_H lied i hate her now
On January 4th 2008 bbydeath157 Said :
bbydeath157 I think somebody is going to be a backstabbberrr! Keep me POSTED :O
On December 20th 2007 kgrf101 Said :
kgrf101 *grr* I hate Jackie!
On December 7th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz damn.. is Jackie her friend?
On December 6th 2007 dsouthernlily Said :
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~Tear~ That is horrible!!
On December 6th 2007 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 OMFG! I can't believe Jackie! I'd do the same thing that u did! Flip out! I can't Emilio! *grrr* I still love the story!
On December 6th 2007 porchanette Said :
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u could have had the ended with a happy pint not sad
On December 6th 2007 veronicavanity Said :
veronicavanity Imma kick Jackies little ass just you watch!
On December 6th 2007 Harumi13 Said :
Harumi13 DUDE thats so sad!!! TOT but i still wuves it^^
On December 5th 2007 ha7 Said :
ha7 Jeez Jackie would not be my friend with that attitude, and I can't belive Emilio!
On December 5th 2007 fruitymangopea Said :
fruitymangopea omg! the stupid jackasses!
On December 5th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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omg!!!!!!! stupid ass!! jackie AND Emilio
On December 5th 2007 cashy31196 Said :
cashy31196 omg! it took long. keep me posted plz
On December 5th 2007 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae omgsh! thats terrible! im so sorry honey!