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Romance Created on 11-26-07 Views(251) Story Rating G

ok so where was I oh yes i start now.

I quickly finished my homework and went to jackie's house to go get her. She came out and we went to go get emilio

"you go ring the doorbell"I told Jackie


'no way he's your boyfriend you go get him"she said

"fine but you have to come with"i said

"ok than"she said

your probably wondering why i am so scared. ok you see emilio's parents are rude and raciest. except emilio is not. so his parents don't like anyone but people that are the same race as them. so i rang the doorbell. than the dogs started barking. oh his dogs are vicious. than like 5 minutes passed and finally someone answered. thank god it was his sister she is nice.

"hi can emilio come out"i asked in my sweetest voice. i sounded like a 5 year old

"sure hold on"she said

than emilio came out in brown which is his best color. He also came out with a brown hat on.He looked so adorible.

"hey you both ready to go to the park"i asked emilio and Kevin

"yeah"they both said

so we walked to the park. Which was crazy. So we got their and started talking and Emilio started showing off his cool stunts.

"he's trying to impress you"said jackie whispering in my ear.

While he was doing his tricks his hat fell off and he didn't notice. So I took it and ran up the stairs all the way to the top. he found out and came running up after me. He started making me laugh and we were having a great time.

"hey doesn't it look like they both like eachother" asked jackie

"it sure does look like it" said kevin "my friend he wouldn't be happy seeing this"

"What do you mean"jackie asked

"he likes rose" said Kevin

"hey guys what are you talking about" I asked

"oh nothing"they both said at the same time

"hey rose I am really sorry but i have to go. I got a call from my parents"said Emilio

"oh its ok. I'll see you at school tommorrow"i said with sadness in my voice

so they left and Jackie sat on the swings grinning.

"what"i asked

"remember how you told me to give you reasons that if Emilio likes you or not" she asked

"yeah"i said

"well let me tell you something I got a whole bunch of reasons for you"she told me

 

hey sorry its not that detailed its hard to add them because i am always in a rush and I am not that good of a writer. So plz rate and comment 8)

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On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess like the fact that KEVIN JUST TOLD HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On December 4th 2007 ha7 Said :
ha7 ohh secret admirer
On November 30th 2007 Harumi13 Said :
Harumi13 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH whois the friend????anyhoogle you...ROCKS!!!!!
On November 29th 2007 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 Luvs it!
On November 26th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall Suh-weet! Keep me posted!
On November 26th 2007 kelkel234 Said :
kelkel234 OMG wat is it wat is it? TELL ME! kk ttyl
On November 26th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
my picture
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