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im in love with my best friend part 5
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 Created on 11-24-07
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ok so me and jackie were walking home from school than something grabbed me all of a sudden. i screamed and turned around. i saw emilio standing there laughing.
"not funny"i said
"yeah it is you should have seen your face"said jackie
i noticed emilio's friend kevin
"hi kevin"i said
"hey rose"said kevin
"hey rose wanna cross the street"asked emilio
"why"i asked
"no reason"he said smiling
"no thanks"i said
"ok"he said
"i got another reason rose"said jackie
"what. what is she talking about"asked emilio
"nothing just a project"i said
"oh"he said
sadly we reached home and jackie's house was the first so it was me emilio and kevin.
"hey rose wanna go to the park later on today"asked emilio
"sure i'll come ring your doorbell"i said
"ok see you than"he said
"bye"i said
ok part 6 might be out a little late sorry. but just to tell you all of this this whole story it really happened to me and its still going on in my life but a little worse you will find soon plz rate and comment
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Please Login to post comments| On November 30th 2007 Harumi13 Said : | |
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOW SO CUTE!!!^_^ |
| On November 29th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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Sweetness! :D |
| On November 26th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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keep me posted..im interested |
| On November 25th 2007 kelkel234 Said : | |
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yea...srry rose but it should be longer....shorteris okay if only u leave a cliffhanger if ya kno wat I mean. I wonder wat Jackie ment when she said wat she said. Welp ur story is rlly good. Tell me when the nxt one is up. |
| On November 24th 2007 analyssarenae Said : | |
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i like it a lot but make it longer and watch capitalizations and grammar! MORE DETAILS! |
| On November 24th 2007 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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make them longer and plz keep me posted i love it thanks |
| On November 24th 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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I like it a lot! Keep me posted please! |
