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im in love with my best friend part 3
Romance
 Created on 11-23-07
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"look there he is"said jackie
i turned around so fast that i almost fell.i smiled when i saw him come with his skateboard in his hands.
"hey rose"he said
"hey emilio this is my friend jackie jackie this is emilio"i said
"hi"said jackie
"hi"said emilio
"hey rose sorry i was late its just that I had to sneak out of my house"said emilio
"sneak out?"i asked
"yeah my mom said that i couldn't go because i got in troble the last time i was here so i had to sneak out"he said
"awww he sneaked out for you."said jackie
I stepped on her foot
"oww"she said
"so why did you ask me to come to the park"he said
"i don't know its just my place where i hang out and talk with my friends"i said
"oh" he said
so we sat down and started to talk. he showed me some of his skateboarding moves which were so awsome. sadly the day had ended short because some guy left his skateboard and emilio asked this one guy if it was his. he said no but i will take it anyway. than we found out the guy who owned the skateboard was right over there and we were the only teens at the park so they might think we stole it so we run home.
"bye rose"said emilio
"bye"i said
with that we left.i was sad that the day had ended.
hope you liked it i know it was a little boring but the next one will be better plz rate and comment
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Please Login to post comments| On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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if this story is acutually real i reading them allz |
| On December 20th 2007 kgrf101 Said : | |
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Sweet! |
| On November 30th 2007 Harumi13 Said : | |
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this story is......AWSOME!!! |
| On November 30th 2007 Harumi13 Said : | |
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WOW i wish i had a friend who would sneek out for me ^_^ |
| On November 29th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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I thought it was good! Thanks 4 letting me know about this story! |
| On November 23rd 2007 kelkel234 Said : | |
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that wasn't boring...I liked it. U nvr told me he skated and eveything. U should send me a pic of him when I send u the pic of *Christy* srry can't say real name. |
| On November 23rd 2007 hayleyswiger14 Said : | |
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this chapter was fine...i wonder what the next one brings.... |
| On November 23rd 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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i like it |
| On November 23rd 2007 veronicavanity Said : | |
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yeahh keep writing. i'm liking it so far. details would be nice though. |
| On November 23rd 2007 analyssarenae Said : | |
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write more! use more details though! that'll make it better than it is now! |
| On November 23rd 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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nice! write more please! |
