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im in love with my best friend part 2
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 Created on 11-22-07
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well emilio and my friendship grew more and more everyday and one day in gym class.
"hey emilio want to go to the park today"i asked
"sure i'll meet you there at 4:30"he said
"great see you there"i said
gym class was fun everyday. he always played around with me. always he put a huge smile on my face.
at 4:40 at the park
"come on rose he isn't coming"said my friend jackie
"he will be here just wait"i said
"its been 10 minutes already"she said
"please just wait a little more"i said
"fine"said jackie
at 5:00
"alright he isn't coming lets go"i said upset
"why are you so upset"she asked
"no reason"i said
"ohhhh rose has a wittle crush on emilio"she said smiling
"no"i said
"yeah you do"she said
"no i don't"i said
"yeah you do"she said
"fine i do have a crush on him"i said
"i always get to you"she said
"thats what i hate"i said
"hey i'll wait a while with you"she said
"no he isn't coming"i said
"hey isn't that him right there"she said
I turned around and when i saw him i smiled.
"yeah thats him"i said smiling
hope you liked it plz rate and comment and this is a true story it really happened to me
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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what a snot hes like LATE and hes the one that suggested the time but if i had a crush i wouldnt mind as long as he showed up lol |
| On May 11th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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patriciaxox is not a bitch if you want to call her that it is just bcuz you are the bitch |
| On January 16th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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well, everyone should know that if ur gonna be on testriffic where people judge your stories, you know you're eventually going to be criticized for something you write. so you people need to stop being retards and just accept criticism |
| On December 20th 2007 kgrf101 Said : | |
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love it! |
| On November 30th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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Patriciaxox was just trying to help you make your story better. I do agree with her that your story is going really fast. That's probably partly because it's a true story so you just want to get to the 'good parts' so to speak. You have a lot of dedication to writing, and that's a good thing. Just keep on writing, and you'll improve. ;) |
| On November 29th 2007 cashy31196 Said : | |
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who cares! just put wutever names u like! dont let other ppl words annoy u! anyway great story! by the way my cousin told me that a story doesnt need too many details, its ur story write wutever u like |
| On November 29th 2007 Harumi13 Said : | |
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HOLY SHIT!!!does Patriciaxox thing she owns the world or something???what a bitch...by the way YOUR StORY ROCKS!! |
| On November 29th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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I can't believe Patriciaxox said that! I think it's really good! |
| On November 26th 2007 iluvcountry90 Said : | |
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Ignore vollygal456... this rox mi sox! |
| On November 23rd 2007 kelkel234 Said : | |
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oooo...MORE MORE! |
| On November 23rd 2007 hayleyswiger14 Said : | |
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wondreful...keep writing....and dont listen to that jealous bitch...AKA Patriciaxox....hehe |
| On November 23rd 2007 Violetlily Said : | |
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no one should pay out the way she writes. if u pay 'er out it makes u sound jelous. |
| On November 23rd 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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hey people- i like her story! I like her names, they're unique! You don't need to criticize her story just because you have nothing better to do! By the way, love the story! Keep me posted? |
| On November 22nd 2007 omfg010203 Said : | |
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listen people, if u dont like the way she writes, keep it to yourself, and if u are gonna critisize her, at least do it nicely and don't be rude about it. |
| On November 22nd 2007 analyssarenae Said : | |
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omgsh forget what that patricia girl said! keep writing it the way it is. i like it alot! and its great the way it is |
| On November 22nd 2007 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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uhhh. not to put this story down but EMILIO? ROSE? soo srrry but those are tacky names. and you went a little fast and theres to much convos and little details about whats happening. i like this story though and hope it continues!! keep me posted |
| On November 22nd 2007 veronicavanity Said : | |
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forget what that person said, keep writing. I like it. |
| On November 22nd 2007 vollygal456 Said : | |
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ok thats really weird stop making stories about that Bitch i hate him |
