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an arranged love marriage part seven
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ok so the pirates was about to slit your throat when will shot the pirate in his arm. the pirate yelled in pain and let go of you. you fell but luckily will caught you.
" now leave before i kill you" said will
they all left afraid that will would kill their captain.
"are you ok" he asked
"yeah thanks for rescuing me" you said "your welcome"
with that you went for a nap and woke up at the middle of the night. you went up on deck. you saw will there
"are you always up this late at night" you asked
will turned around "oh i was waiting for you to wake up if you wanted to eat anything" he said
"thats sweet" you said "but i am not hungry right now"
there was an akward moment of silence.
"julie i have to tell you something" said will
"what is it" you asked
" well julie I I
"what is it will" you said
"I..................
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| On November 9th 2007 Redneck151 Said : | |
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ok it's alil longer than the ones u wrote before but still alil short but still really good |
| On November 9th 2007 Harumi13 Said : | |
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like i said keep them longer not shorter!!!!!!!!!! |
| On November 8th 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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wat is it!? plz keep me posted! |


