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A Love Bled Out
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He didn't realize the effect he was having on her. Or maybe he did. Either way every breath she took felt like he chest was collapsing when he was around. His smile brought on both a feeling of despiration and fear. It was the teeth. His long white fangs that glimmered in the moon light. Was he going to bite her this time or leave her again? The mystery continued.
"Isabella, let me release you from this human form." He winced at human. "You could be so beautiful as Queen of Darkness, eternal youth at your finger tips."
She couldn't speak. He over powered her with his blood stained lips. He placed his hand on her chest.
"Your heart, it has been broken. I remeber what it was like, the hard echo in by chest beating against my lungs, making it hard to swallow. I remember love, but I also remember pain. A beauty like you should never have to hurt again."
"Angel." She whispered. "I saw him with another girl." She was reffering to her cheating boy friend,Michael. A tear slipped down Isabella's cheek.
"Please, it will only take a moment."
"Why do you want be to join you so much?"
"I love you, Isabella."
"You're incapable of falling in love."
"I am incapable of getting hurt."
"What about my family?"
"You're eighteen, Isabella, tell them you're leaving."
Isabella sighed, her effort was useless. She knew if he really wanted to, he could change her right now or worse.
"Ok." She whispered.
"As you wish my love."
Angel held her close letting her breath warm his cold neck. Her heart beating onto his chest. He waited for her blood pressure to rise out of anticipation. She began to shake as he leaned down to press his teeth down into a main artery. Isabella went limp, but she was not dead. He carried her to a black casket with red lining. He waited. The scars healed and her hair turned from deep red to a glossy black. He freckles vanished into her skin. The transformation lured him to her for a first kiss. Her eyes slowly opened revealing a sweet crystal blue like Angel's.
"Angel?" She whispered unsure of her condition.
"Yes?"
"Am I alive."
"No." He smiled.
im not sure if this story will be continued or not. A Love Bled Out is a story about love revenge passion deceit and power. if you want to find out what happens to Angel, Isabella, and the cheating ex boyfriend, you'll have to get the ratings over 10..thanks
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| On July 6th 2008 LovisaJoy Said : | |
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damn! come on perople! RATE RATE RATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KMP! |
| On June 30th 2008 EdwardRoxMySox Said : | |
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ghh. this sounds reallly good. please continue? =] |


