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Alockchay pt 3

Creative Created on 6-25-07 Views(196) Story Rating G

   Oriya stood outside of the cave intrigued. Queen Aria healed everything in the forrest from each blade of grass to the little animals that sturred in the bushes.

   Aria herself looked ill for she had used most of her magic to heal the forrest. She barely had enough to keep her alive.

   Oriya, confused and exausted, told herself it must have been a dream. She couldn't make herself believe that the lost queen of Alockchay had returned as well as break the evil curse that had fallen upon her. She desided that it would be best to try to go back to sleep, hoping that it would take her back to reality. But dreams are never dreams when there is no good magic to bridge the worlds: humanity, the realm of reality and faerie, the realm of fantasy.

   As Oriya lay there thinking of what would happen if this where all real, she slowly drifted off to sleep.

"Oriya, Oriya!" a voice whispered.
"Go away!" she shoutedas she ran frantically through the wood.
"Oriya, you've betrayed me." the voice whispered louder.
"No! Go away! Please leave me alone!!"
"Oriya, you're hurting me!" the voice whisper shouted.
Everything went dark. Still running, Oriya fell. A sharp pain shot up her leg, it was broken. She screamed out in pain, but a hand quiclky covered her mouth. When he let go she tried to scream again, but nothing would come out.

   In a panic she tried fighting him off, but he was too strong. Oriya lay there in fear and in pain as he sat on top of her legs. She yelped in pain, but he quickly told her to shut up. Forcefully she obeyed as he began to tell her a story of a little boy that was born five minutes late and how those few pointless moments cost him his birthright. A story of a never ending jealousy.
"Adrius?" she strugled to say.
"Hmm beauty and brains."
 he said as he leaned down and kissed her. She suprized herself as she kissed him back. He leaned up to admire her yet wonder why someone like that was not on his side. She pulled him back on her, still in pain, but she just couldn't controll herself. He was just so addicting. It began as a kiss but became so much more. They where stripped of their clothes and did something she would never forgive herself for.
At the end she asked "But why my dreams?"
"My dear this is not your dreams, It's my reality." He said as he drove a dagger through her stomach. She gasped for breath for a few minutes and stopped. She wouldn't have to live with the guit ever again. Oriya was dead.

 

**Sorry it took was so short, but I had to end it there. And dont flame because theres a tiny sex scene, it had to be in there for reasons and I didn't drag it out because this stories not about that.** please comment and rate

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On June 28th 2007 xhyperxblondie Said :
xhyperxblondie ballin story. when is the next up? my sunburn hurts :/
On June 27th 2007 starryboo Said :
starryboo Iwww...this is really getting good...keep me posted...Thanx!
On June 26th 2007 ashleym1994 Said :
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oriya cant really be dead right?? its getting really interesting keep it up i cant wait for the next one
On June 25th 2007 Akinka Said :
Akinka OMG! Oriya dead?!?! It was just a dream, wasn't it?!!?! NOOO! Its getting better & better!!!! Keep me posted!
On June 25th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle GASP!!!!!!!!! Gawd Adrius is such a pain in the ass. I hope he dies painfully and hopefully oriya isn't really dead. ;( But i love it all the same. keep me posted!
On June 25th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx good:) tell me when the next part is up