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+ 12	A Love Bled Out
+ 3	SPIDER WEB: unmarked graves
+ 6	SPIDER WEB: intro
+ 17	When Darkness Becomes Your Last Hope pt 5
+ 23	in the eyes of a killer
+ 24	Alockchay pt 4
+ 22	Alockchay pt 3
+ 22	Alockchay part 2
+ 25	Alockchay
+ 25	When Darkness Becomes Your Last Hope pt 4
+ 42	When Darkness Becomes Your Last Hope pt. 3
+ 58	when darkness becomes your last hope pt. 2
+ 74	When Darkness Becomes Your Last Hope
+ 68	my story

As she stepped into the forrest she could feel the changes in the air. It wasn'y the same sweet air she came to love, it was smokey and dark. The once icey blue sky was now an awful smokey gray. The once emerald green grass was now as amber brown. What happened to my home while I was gone?

   In the distance shouting could be heard. People where frantic. She desided it would be best to stay in disguise until she could figure out what was happenening. She was draped in a honey amber cloak, tho hood hung over most of her face, hiding a silver crown. Her auburn red hair lay to her shoulders, in the sunlight it looked like fire. Her crown sat sat on her head, it was silver and wrapped around her head like a headdress of flowers. Under her cloak  was a most beautiful garment. It was royal blue with silver lining coveed a pearl white silk gown that barely showed behind the fabioris. Indeed this was the queen of Alockchay, land of the forgotten forrest.

                                         ~~*~~

     100 years ago. She left her people to fight in a grave battle, which gave humanity a chance to distroy the Earth. She was an ally of the angels, but would allow any of her subjects to join the war. So secretly she left Alockchay hoping her home would be safe, but when she returned she had found her hoe what seemed in moral ruins.

                                       ~~*~~  

   I must return to the castle and restore order unto my kingdom. When she walked into town, her disguise kept her hidden among her people. They stared at the stranger who walked through mysteriously, not know the stranger as their forgotten queen.

A sruffy man to look about in his thirties aproached her. "Might a fine lass like yourself be interested in a fine establishment like mine?" he said as he pointed to a worn down cottage that was no place fit for a queen much less any woman. .
"No sir I'm visiting an old friend and i really must hury thank thee for thy invitation" she declined regally hiding the true meaning of her quest.
"No, please I insist" he said with a devilish grin as he grabbed her wrist.
"What have my people resorted to?" she said under her breath.
"Your people? YOUR PEOPLE??" he laughed as he let go of her arm, "You talk like the bloody queen herself."
I should have never let them get so rutheless. Now most people would have been shooken up and revealed themselves at this point, but she stayed calm and went her way.
"Worthless selfrighteous hag!" he yelled at her as she walked away. She softly chuckled as she kept going. After all she was "the bloody queen herself".

    Half way to the castle and old begger woman aproached her and asked "Are you our fair queen?"
She saw that the old woman was blind and said "How could you recondnize me?"
The old woman smiled and said, "My dear, and old wise witch can always find the true of heart."
The queen laughed, not even she could keep a secret. It's always been said that people can't see whats right in front of them, maybe it takes the blind to know what is.
"Are you the wise witch of the land" she asked the old woman "I remeber her being younger"
"Yes, will you save us?"
Save us? what was she speaking of.
"Come i will explain on the way, but you must come quickly his spies are every where."
"Who's?"
"Your brothers" the old woman whispered.

                                         ~~*~~

   When they arived at the old woman's home, the queen noticed a sweet air, a feeling she surely missed. The old woman had kept the ways of the queens rule. She seemed to be the only loyal subject loyal to her name in this cold forgottten kingdom, which was once a lively world that every other world respected.

"Dear soul, are thou the only one who hath remebered my reign?"
"No, my queen, there are others, but very few. I am ashamed to say that after you left for the forbidden war, your brother Adrius came to power and convensed the people the people that you had abandoned them. The few, including myself, that refused to believe him and fallow Adrius and began the great rebellion about ninety years ago. He turned your loyal subjucts into beggars and old hags. But I'm afraid the knights and ladies who remained loyal where allowed to stay in the castle only as servants."
"That must be why I must save you."
"Yes, but remeber milady, the ones who know you are the ones who remained loyal so dont reveal yourself to anyone else. Your fallowers will know who you are and will help protect you. If anyone of Adrius's spies or fallowers discover your identity, there will be no hope for us, please bring back our kingdom."
"will thy acompany me dear soul?"
"aye yes, i will be like the raven of the sky and watch over you and become a wolf and fight with you."
"bless you" the queen said as she lay her hand on the old womans heart and suddenly the old woman returned to her youthfull self before the curse.
"Oh thank you!" the now beautiful young girl exclaimed.
The queen waved it away an left the cottage.
"Long live Queen Aria" she whispered.

    My brother has betraued me! First he cowers and refuses to go into battle and now he over thows me! I will need help in this battle. First I must find those who are still loyal to me and return them to their normal state then I shall call upon my alliesfrom the war. Aria thought to herself. She sat by the old oak tree to restore the power she used to heal the old woman. She had now understood why the Earth was dying. Noone used their powers for good. They had stolen the magic and life from nature for the wrong reasons. When she restored her magic from healing the tree looked like it was the only alive thing in the forrest. If Aria's kingdom wasn't restored in the old ways. The Earth would perrish for all worlds.

 

**SO TELL BE WHAT YOU THINK....WHO WILL POPUP? WILL SHE DEFEAT HER BROTHER? WILL HER REIGN BE LOST FOR EVER? WILL ARIA FALL IN LOVE? WILL HER HELPFUL FRIEND DIE IN BATTLE? (tell me what should happen next and if i use your ideas everyone who helped me will get credit in the next story, but you got to rate and comment if you want more***

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