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Alyssa Barns... How could this happen to me? Chapter 2
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Alyssa Barns... How could this happen to me?

Alyssa Barns... How could this happen to me?

Fiction Created on 11-12-07 Views(25) Story Rating G

This is the 1st chapter of my story. I LOVE IT SECOND CHAPTER COMING SOON!

 

__---Chapter 1, Kandi’s regular Life---__

Hello. My name is Kandi Barns and my life is pretty much wake up, get ready, leave, have lunch, go shopping, go home, make dinner, watch T.V., take shower, brush teeth, and go to bed. Then when I wake up at 8:00 in the morning repeat that same schedule until Saturday and Sunday, sometimes even Monday! What I meant by leave after get ready and before have lunch was to go to work. I’m 15 and just working at Denny’s for a part time job. The rest of the time is to do what ever is on my schedule that I already told you. What I meant by I repeat the schedule until Saturday and Sunday, sometimes even Monday was I have a "Go Girl" day at my house. All my girlfriends go out, check out boys, go shopping, more checking out boys, you know, and the regular typical girl night out type thing. We girls love to have fun. I have to cook dinner on Monday-Friday because it’s one of my chores. So, have a good time and listen to my life. Oh but wait, your lucky because today is Saturday. So let’s go PAR-TAY!!!!!!!!!!!

"But mom," I said aggravated, "Saturday is always my day off and a day to check out cute boys."

"But Kandi," my mom said mimicking me, "this Saturday is your grandmothers’ birthday!"

"So, she’ll have other birthdays." I said furiously, "I’m not getting any younger. And I know she’s not either. But I’m trying to say that she already has a husband and I don’t even have a boyfriend, which is why I need to go to the mall to pick up a boyfriend. I’m going to get married someday, you know."

"I know, but your grandmother might pass away soon."

"Mom, she’s only 53, which makes you……."

"Oh be quiet. Listen, I’ll talk to her, but if she planned to do something with you kids or she wants to see you at the age o f 15 instead of 15 ½ then you can’t go. But, if she didn’t or doesn’t then you can go check out those boys, you know." She said mimicking me again.

"Really?," I said as my mom shook her head up and down then started shaking her head from side to side, "Oh mom, you.. What?"

"Under one circumstance," she said firmly.

"What?"

"Only if you wash your room and pick up the bathroom."

"Huh?"

"I mean, well just reverse what I said."

"Mom, don’t sweat it. You ROCK!!!! Just call her, quick!"

"Yes ma’am." She said giggling.

"Perfect!"

"Hi mom, were you planning on doing anything with Kandi and Rylina because they…"

There she was, asking with her sweet mommy please, voice. I know that voice because I use that same voice when I want something. I even used it today. "Great. She’ll be so happy. Okay, love you;" she said as she was hanging up the phone, "You’ll be happy to know that you’re free to do whatever you’d like today."

"Great. Mom I love you so much! You ROCK!!!! I’ll go call the girls and tell them to grab their boyfriends and their magic."

"They have magic? What are they witches or something?"

"No. They have magic for making me love someone and then getting up the courage to ask him out."

"Are you sure about this?"

"Yes mom, I’m serious."

"Yeah, I totally believe you."

"Mom I’m serious."

"Okay. Okay. I believe you."

"Good. I’m going to tell my girlfriends that we can go out. So if you would excuse me. I’ll be right back"

"Yes ma’am." She said again, giggling.

"Hey Alyssa, it’s me. What’s going on? I was just telling you that we could go to the mall! So call me when you get this. Talk to you later."

"How did that go?"

"She wasn’t even there. So now I’m going to call Rylina." As I was saying that, I started dialing her number.

While I’m calling my friends, I’ll tell you about them. Well Alyssa, I met just last year. See, I was the new girl last year. But Rylina and I have been friends since we were babies. And my mom is her godmother. And her parents died in a car crash, so she now lives with me. The reason why I had to call her was because she was sleeping over Alicia’s house. Speaking of Alicia, she and I have been friends since 6th grade. We’ve just been keeping in touch. They all have boyfriends. Carols boyfriends’ name is Matt (Matthew). He’s really nice. Then there is Rylina. Her boyfriend is really cute, he comes over all he time. Anyway his name is Ethan. Last but not least (because I will have a boyfriend some day) is Alicia, her boyfriend is Cameron. They are all really nice guys. Once Rylina and Ethan were kissing in the bedroom and they were only 10. Yeah, they’ve been going out since they were 9. Wow huh?

"So, can you go?" I asked Rylina and Alicia with a hopeful voice. But they said they couldn’t because Alicia grandmother is coming up and Rylina wants to meet her.

"Hello, earth to Rylina, you live here, so technically if my mom says no then you have to go to the mall with me. Ha ha. I’ll call you back."

"What was that all about?" my mom asked.

"Mom, Rylina has to come right?"

"Why? Does she want to meet Alicia’s grandmother?"

"Yes. How did you know that? Were you listening on the phone?"

"Maybe," My mom mumbled with a guilty voice.

"Mom she’s none of your business!"

"Yes she is she’s my daughter too!"

"Well I wish she wasn’t. She’s a pain in my butt!" I SCREAMED while I was on my way to my room (to pick up but of course she didn’t know that). "I HATE you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Honey, come on out. Honey, I’m sorry. Are you okay?"

I thought, ‘I’ve never felt this feeling before. It’s very weird. I felt angry but powerful at the same time.’ "My mom is a very noisy person. She likes to worsen up my life. She’s not even a wife. I wish her lips were zippered shut, like a muzzled mutt." As soon as I said that, she stopped talking.

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On November 12th 2007 perfect1not Said :
perfect1not If you can't read it... just comment it saying :CANT READ. And I will re post it in bigger size.