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Bleeding Love (Prolouge)

Romance Created on 7-19-08 Views(115) Story Rating PG

*Samantha's POV*

          It was just the average Thursday morning and I had to get up for school. I could hear my mother and father chatting in the living room so I knew that it was time to get up. They were pretty much my alarm clock. I looked at my cellphone and it said 6:45 am. I woke up late!

          I got up and went into the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth and do all the things that make me clean. Then I put on my clothes. Nothing too fancy. Just some blue jeans, a green and black stripped shirt, and some white flip flops. Yeah I know, not anything that a girl would wanna' wear but I didn't want to be late for school.

          I grabbed a piece of toast and juice box or orange juice and headed out the door. I heard my father calling me. I guess I should have said something before I zoomed out all quick.

"Have a good day, Samantha!" he yelled.

"You too!" I yelled back.

          I got onto my bike and peddled to school. I would usually let my mom or dad drive me but obviously they weren't in the mood for driving today. That took about 15 minutes but at least I got there. As soon as I stepped into the school the bell rang. The doors of the classrooms shut one by one, like a domino affect.

          I went into my first block: History. Mr.Sanders was the teacher and he was pretty harsh. I dreaded being late in his class. If it was just 5 seconds he would humiliate you in front of the whole class. As I stepped into the classroom I looked at him. He had a blank facial expression.

"Miss Johnson, do you mind telling us why you're late?" he asked me.

"I had a rough night," I said as I began to recite what he usually desires us to say. "I apologize for not coming on time to get education to become something in life, I apologize for interupting my peers learning experience and I will try my best for it to not happen again.

         I sighed and walked to my desk. I listened to him lecture for about 30 minutes and the other hour seemed like 5 seconds. I heard the bells ring and I grabbed my books to go switch classes. Right when I was about to walk out, Mr.Sanders called my name.

"Samantha, could you please come to my desk?"

          I rolled my eyes and turned around to walk to his desk. He took a sip of water in a "Best teacher" coffee mug. He put his hands together and put them on his desk.

"Samantha, you're a smart girl but your grades are slipping up and I want you to do more studying," he said to me in a stern but yet polite voice.

"I'm sorry Mr.Sanders, a lot of things are going on at home and it's just hard for me. But I'm going to try to do better," I said as I started to get up and walk into the hallways.

"That satisfies me, I expect great things out of you Miss Johnson."

          I saw my "see-ya-when-I-see-ya" friends in the hallway. Her name was Michelle, she was beautiful. And I have to admit, I would get sorta jealous at times. Escpecially when I saw her with her boyfriends.

"Hey Sammy! Wanna hang out today?" she asked me.

"Ehhh..." I thought for a minute. What did I have to lose?

"Sure..." I said.

"Great! Meet me at my house right after school." she said.

                                            ***After School***

         I just came out of Orchestra practice. Yes, I'm an istrument geek. My only real friend, Alex Mitchell walked beside me. We had a strong connection with each other. I looked over at him and he looked at me. We both laughed for no apparent reason.

"Are you going anywhere today?" he asked me.

         He was going to ask me to go somewhere with him! I was about to say yes but I remembered that Michelle and I were supposed to hang out. She just had to ask me on this day.

"Um, yeah, I'm hanging out with Michelle." I said.

          He had a kind of disappointed expression. I felt a bit guilty but I didn't know he was gonna ask me to hang out.

"I'm sorry. Well see ya tomorrow," I said as I started to walk out of the school.

         He grabbed my wrist and I turned around.

"I love you, Samantha." he said.

         And after he said those 4 words, my life changed completely.

 

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On September 22nd 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
brokenwings122 I really like the idea, although I agree with the others when they say that you took things a bit fast and could have used more detail. Although, since this is only the prologue I'm assuming it will flash back a bit in Chapter 1 and explain their relationship better. However you do it, I'm sure it will be great. Also, my apologies it took me so long to review your work. I'll subscribe so no need to keep me posted.
On August 1st 2008 MizzKierra14 Said :
MizzKierra14 good kmp plz
On July 26th 2008 MillieMarie13 Said :
MillieMarie13 It's alright kmp
On July 25th 2008 purplelemon55 Said :
purplelemon55 i think it sucks
On July 22nd 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 it is a nice concept and everything but it went too fast and there were many spots where you could add a lot more detail. there were a few grammatical errors but nothing too bad.
On July 21st 2008 rawrbby13 Said :
rawrbby13 Kmp :] I enjoyed it!
On July 20th 2008 sportsluver33 Said :
sportsluver33 oh i like it please kmp
On July 20th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox Don't you think it went a little to fast? You should slow it down a bit and explain the relationship between Alex and Sam first before putting them in another relationsship. Id like to see what happens though so keeep me posted.
On July 20th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wowww, please kmp!! :) love itttt
On July 20th 2008 bluecat62892 Said :
bluecat62892 awesome storie
On July 20th 2008 Ash94leigh Said :
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On July 20th 2008 mysterywhateve Said :
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On July 20th 2008 username685 Said :
username685 that was sudden. good story though.
On July 19th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS awwaww this is sweet kmp