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Temptations...

Drama Created on 4-1-08 Views(137) Story Rating G

   Angie glared at Todd as he fumbled with his jacket zipper. She had discovered something in his car. Another girl's clothes! What were they doing in there, she knew they weren't hers. He started to speak up, but she shot him another dirty look.
   "I'm not gonna get mad, but I wanna know whose clothes these are." she demanded. He still didn't say a word. Something was holding him back from telling the truth. Something was saying for him to lie or keep it a secret. Something was controlling his mind. Whatever it was, he didn't seem to like it too much.
   He looked over at her, tears were starting to form in her eyes. "You're my boyfriend Todd, and you can't tell me the truth!" she yelled at him. Her crying voice shook him, he wasn't used to having girls cry in front of him. "I'm...sorry." he said. "Drop me off at my house," she said to him as she put on her jacket. "I don't wanna be around you."
   Those words seemed to anger him. Being rejected? That's what was happening to him. And by his own girlfriend, the even worse part. "If you won't take me home, I'll walk home." She started to walk away but he grabbed her by her arm. He had a strong grip too.
   "Let me go Todd! Just accept that you're a loser..." And she actually meant those words. Her blonde her starting to float in the air as the wind started to act wild. He looked into her deep green eyes and started to speak.
   "I'm sorry, why can't you accept that?" he asked wanting to know. She shook her head at him and wondered what her life would be liked without him. Would it be better than it already was? "I bet you don't even know that today is my birthday, do you?" she said in a cold voice. He sighed at her. "Yes I do." 
   He fiddled in his pocket until he pulled out a small green box. Angie tried to imagine what it could be that he was going to give to her. A ring of some sort. "I got you this," he said as he handed it to her. "It's a gift for your birthday." It was a real diamond ring! But she knew he had done something illegal to get it. "Where did you get this? And tell me the truth!" she said.
   She could see it in his eyes that he had stolen it. She threw it to the ground and walked away. To her surprise, he wasn't following her. Tears streamed down her face and they stayed there because it was a cold day. It seemed like her eyes were closed because all she could see was black. Nothing else...nothing.
   That's when she felt herself bump into something hard. It seemed like a person. She fell to the ground wincing in pain. "My head..." she groaned. There in front of her, stood Greg Harrison from her college. "G-G-Greg?" she asked while stuttering a couple of times. He put out his hand to help her up.
   "It's me." he said. "And what are you doing out here crying?" She looked him in the eyes. He was the most beautiful guy she had ever seen. But she didn't like him, all she wanted was a friend. Wow, I wonder if she's still dating that Todd guy, he thought to himself. "Just problems with people, nothing really." she lied. She knew it was over between her and Todd.
  "Ohh, well I know what will make you feel better." he said to her. Nothing at this point could make her feel better. He looked at her for a few seconds and gave her a long romantic kiss. I've been wanting to go there for a long time...and finally I have, he said to himself. Angie was surprised, but she liked it. "Shall we go on a date?" he asked her. She smiled. "I take that as a yes." 
   What the two of them didn't know is that Todd had been watching them the whole time. "She's mine!" he grunted to himself. "If I can't have her...no one will." He got in his car and drove away...

I'VE HEARD TESTRIFFIC IS SHUTTING DOWN SOON AND I HAD SOOO MANY GOOD STORY IDEAS. WELL THIS IS ONE OF THEM AND THIS WILL BE THE MOST DRAMA-FILLED STORY I WILL EVER HAVE. LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!

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On April 2nd 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
brokenwings122 Awesome, but I thought it kinda went REALLY fast. Try to slow it down, eh? Kmp! Great idea btw...
On April 2nd 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 kmp!
On April 2nd 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp
On April 2nd 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmp pliz
On April 2nd 2008 Panda224 Said :
Panda224 Love it. Kmp.
On April 2nd 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster drama filled? LIEK A SOAP OPRA! "oh God, I broke my leg!". wife walks in, no, you did not break your leg, I BROKE YOUR LEG!" DUN DUN DUN!!!! "AND.... IM PREGNENET..... WITH YOUR BROTHER'S CHILD!!!!". DUN DUN DUNNNNN!!! The bro comes in, "AND I HAVE CANCER AND MUST BE CURED WITHIN DAYS! THE DOC COULD HANDLE IT..... IF HE WERENT A SPIDER!!!!". DUN DUN DUN!!!!
On April 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 great job!kmp plzz!
On April 1st 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 oh man... keep it up, and kmp