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Drew took out a razor and put it on Ana's neck. The metal felt cold against her skin. It sent chills through her body. "Be quiet, or I'll kill you." he said in a low voice. She didn't want to die, she wanted to stay alive. She stayed quiet as he threw her in the backseat of his car. Drew threatened to kill me. So I stayed quiet. After he threw me in the backseat of his car, I was knocked out for a couple of hours. I got up after a while, but I wasn't in Antonio's house. I must have been in Drew's. I looked around and I wasn't comfortable. The house smelled like beer and smoke. I saw prostitutes laying around on the floor. And guys smoking weed. Ana is a nice name, too. Ha, that was funny Ana. "I see you two have met." he said lighting a cigarette. He looked at me with red eyes. He inhaled some of the smoke and blew it out in my face. I tried to block it with my hands, but it got in my eyes and nose. I coughed for a few minutes and rubbed my watery eyes. He just stood their smoking. "So you're not going to answer me? Get up and hug me," I wasn't going to hug him. "Fine. Put this on."
Authors Note:I've been writing each part of this story everyday. Since Christmas is in 2 days, I'm going to write the next part tomorrow. Then I probably won't write another part until Thursday or Friday. Merry Christmas! |
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| On December 24th 2007 damita3 Said : | |
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Felicidades......plz keep me posted!!! |
| On December 23rd 2007 alex5005 Said : | |
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u know how to get a reader's attention |
| On December 23rd 2007 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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nice... keep it up |
| On December 23rd 2007 deshanna13 Said : | |
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oh shyyt i hope they get out!!!nice job *two more thumbs up*Feliz Navidad!!!!=] |
| On December 23rd 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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I LOVE IT!!! KEEP ME POSTED!!! AND MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU TOO!!! |
| On December 23rd 2007 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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awsome keep me posted |
| On December 23rd 2007 BlackHeartedMe Said : | |
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Wow! This story is really good!!! Keep me posted please! Oh and MERRY CHRISTMAS! |
| On December 23rd 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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WoW! I hope her and Jay escape! *thumbs up* MERRY CHRISTMAS! :) |
| On December 23rd 2007 jennaferz Said : | |
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i likeee it. |


