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Creative Created on 12-21-07 Views(173) Story Rating G

   I can't believe Dad just put me out because of Abby. "Drew, calm down. I don't know what's with her," started my mom. "Sometimes I wish she wasn't born. Why'd she turn out so evil?" Did Mom just say that? She said I could stay, but you know what? I don't want to stay. "You know what Mom, you're a huge liar. You caused people to get out of jail when they murdered so many people. And Dad, you operate on people and LET them die. Fuck both of you, you too Abby." I said all of that.
    I ran in the house and took out 1 bag (a really big bag). These were the things I put in them; all my clothes, my blankets and pillows, about $40, and I took my Ipod and put that in my pocket. I was out of there. When I got outside Abby, nor mom or dad. I'm going to call them Jill and Scott from now on. I looked back and ran with it. Where was I going to stay? That's when I thought about Antonio. He was my ex boyfriend. But we were really good friends. 
    I walked to his house. Knocking on the door for a while, he finally answered. He had no shirt on either. "Uh, hey Antonio." I said. His tan made me get butterflies. "Oh hey Ana," he said reaching out to hug me. I hugged him back, putting my head to his chest. I was starting to cry. He could feel the tears on my face and he wiped them off. "C'mon on in." he said. I went inside. 
    No one was there with the two of us. We sat down on a sofa. "So why'd you come over here?" he asked me. (Authors Note:This conversation is going to be a little long so here's the deal. Antonio=Dark    Ana=Regular)

Well my Dad kicked me out.
Why the hell would he do that?
I don't know. I told Abby I hoped she fell off of her horse. And she did. So he told me to get out.
Oh, so where are you going to stay?
I don't know, that's why I came here.
You want to stay here?
Yeah, where else can I go?
You have a lot of friends. And plus my parents would freak if they found out you want to stay here.
You told me a couple of months ago this was your house.
Yeah, uh... It is. My parents just don't want anyone staying here.
In your own house?
Yeah. Alright, you can stay. Alright?
Alright, thank you.

   I was going to stay with Antonio. And I felt happy. He went in the kitchen and bought out some Pepsi. He handed me a glass and I sipped some. "Thanks," I said. He nodded, I guess I forgot how he said thank-you. "Well you can have a the livingroom, ok?" I nodded my head. I think I was starting to like him, probably because I was attracted to him physically. He had a 6 pack and I just wanted to lay my head on it. 
    For a while we were watching T.V. It was nice. I looked at him and leaned over to kiss him. And guess what, he kissed me back. We were making-out for a few minutes when I pulled away. It was wrong. He's dating Jada, the school bitch. "I'm sorry Antonio, I need to get some fresh air." I said. I ran out the front door. Sometimes things can be so tempting. But I don't want to be out here looking at the ground. I want to go kiss him again.
   

 

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On December 22nd 2007 amalie777 Said :
amalie777 this is cool, keep me posted
On December 21st 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said :
ALIYAH1994 i like it. it's cool. plz keep me posted!!!
On December 21st 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 its good :D
On December 21st 2007 DinosaurGurl Said :
DinosaurGurl keep me posted polzz
On December 21st 2007 playfulfuzz Said :
playfulfuzz please continue the story... it cought my intersest and i like it... having it end were you have her wanting to kiss him again is a great attention getter... i like it alot please let me be posted...
On December 21st 2007 BlackHeartedMe Said :
BlackHeartedMe I like this alot!! Keep me posted please!
On December 21st 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 very cute keeps meh posted plzz
On December 21st 2007 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 Ooah! They kissed! Nice job! I like it lotz! I'm hooked! Continue to keep me posted! :)
On December 21st 2007 alex5005 Said :
alex5005 yes go kiss him, maybe farther lol...its good