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Night In Nevada Part One

Creative Created on 9-12-07 Views(66) Story Rating G

Crystal and Jake were two college students. They made wonderful grades, and were very much in love. Crystal had just turned 19 and Jake was 20. "Hey babe so you want to-----" Jake was cut off short by Crystal. "I love you so much." said Crystal as she stared into Jake's deep brown eyes. "I love you too. But I need to ask----" Jake was cut off short again. This time Crystal started to hug him. Jake was starting to get annoyed but he still liked it. The two of them got up and walked into the cafe.

"Jake could you get me some ketchup?" asked Crystal. Jake walked over to get Crystal the ketchup when Amy Lowner walked up to him. "Hey Jake. You have any plans next week?" asked Amy. "Uh yeah. I have a girlfriend you know. So uh move..." said Jake in a frustrated voice. "Ugh!!! I can't believe he doesn't like me." said Amy. Amy was the "hottest" girl in school. "Come on girls. We'll show Crystal what revenge is." said Amy as she was bossing her posse around.

"Here's your ketchup baby." "Thank you." said Crystal.

Crystal started to put on some lip-gloss when Amy walked up again Jake. "Mind if I join you two?" asked Amy in a mean like way. "Oh sure, it no problem." said Crystal. Jake looked at Crystal as if he were mad she let Amy sit with them. "You know you two are sooo cute together." said Amy. Jake knew that she was trying to suck up to Crystal so she could get close to him.

"Thank you I guess....I think." said Jake. "Do you want two guys want to come over to my house next week?" asked Amy.

Jake had plans for him and Crystal to go to Vegas. But somehow Amy knew. She knew that Crystal would say yes. "What a dirty little whore..." thought Jake in his head. "Oh we'd love to go." said Crystal anxiously.

"Are you having some type of party?" asked Crystal.

"Yes, a pool party." said Amy.

"Oh, I love pool parties." said Crystal.

"Then you'll escpecially love this one." said Amy with a smirk on her face.

Amy walked away with her friends and her little pink purse in her hand.

"Why did you let her invite us? Why did you even let her sit with us?" asked Jake frustrated.

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On September 23rd 2007 pnkchc06 Said :
pnkchc06 I like it!