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Was It A Dream Part One

Creative Created on 8-18-07 Views(62) Story Rating G

"Oh my God!My baby!"Mia's mother was screaming and screaming and wouldn't stop.Mia couldn't open her eyes.All she saw was blackness.She wanted to cry so bad but she couldn't.Everything seemed like it was going down hill.

She wondered why would such a thing happen to her.She didn't do anything to deserve it.Why would it be her and not Mike.How?She felt as if her life was a waste.Nothing could stop her pain.

She felt the ambulance truck roll away.She knew she wasn't going back home that day.She arrived at the hospital and was transfered into one of the rooms.She felt so much pain if she had a gun she would shoot herself.

"How are you feeling darlin?"asked a nurse with a Texan accent.Mia couldn't speak.She moved her lips in a soft way.The nurse understood she was in too much pain to speak.So she rubbed Mia's forehead and walked out while writing some on an orange pad.

Mia's parents walked in and looked at her."Mia everything will be ok.Your mother can't speak right now.But please stick in there for her."said Mia's father.

"I love you------"Mia's sentence was cut off short when she felt a major pain run down her back.Mia started to black out when three doctors and 5 nurses rushed in.Mia was sent to the Intensive Care Unit.The nurses had to hold Mia down becuase she was shaking and having seizures.

Mia couldn't have any guest for the rest of the day.Eventually Mia fell asleep from all the medicines the doctors gave her.Mia started to have a dream.She was in some restaraunt.With some odd looking boy.It wasn't Mike.But more like an animal basically an ape man.

Mia woke up screaming."Please get me out of here.I need to get out!"Mia was panicing.The nurse gave her a shot which made her go to sleep again.Mia was in so much pain.Even in her sleep she knew that she was hurting.

                                     One Week Later

Mia had gotten out of the hospital and had to be taken care of hand and feet.Mia was a fast healer and she was perfect body wise.But her heart was still hurtung from Mike.

She got a call from one of her friends."Mia come on I've hooked you up with this totally hot guy.And he says he can't wait to meet you.Hurry and get dressed.You know you have that hot latin blood."said Nina,Mia's friend.

Mia got dressed so quick yoy would have thought she was going to leave town to go to Vegas.

Ok I'm going to leave you hanging until tomorrow.Rate and comment if you want more.

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On August 18th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 im very interested and want more. keep it up!