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Victor part 15

Creative Created on 8-7-07 Views(87) Story Rating G

***He flew backwards, his back smashing into a tree that sent him crashing to the ground. His mind and body were englufed in pain. His lungs refused to work as he lay there in a complete state of painful shock.***

Lights flashed, voices echoed. But Victor was completly oblivious to his surroundings. Finally, he inhaled deeply.  Glorious air revived his clouded mind. With great effort he pushed himself to his hands and knees. He examined the battle through tears. Patrick was now frantically creating sheilds, trying to block Forrests access to the injured Victor. Victor stooped there, unmoving.  Slwoly he turned his head to the place where the three bus-riders had been hidden.  He noticed the girl peeking over the old limbs, her eyes large and frightened as she whatched Patrick and Cedirc defending themselves. He stared at her for a long moment before finally deciding to get back up.

He pushed his body up with his arms and legs, grumbling in pain. Every part of his body ached as he staggered to his feet.  He leaned againt the tree, trying to forget the pain, and focus on the fight. His vision faltered as he stumbled a few steps foward.  His massive headach pulsed. Slowly, he brought a hand to the back of his head, feeling wetness. He examined his hand, seeing it slightly covered in red blood. He carelessly wiped his waisted blood on his jeans, taking a few deep breaths. After wiping away tears and sweat, he was ready.

With his balance and self-control fully recovered, Victor took a few steps closer to the fight. All emotion that consumed him was now utter anger. Quickly placing his hands together, he concentrated more then ever. His anger pulsed through his body and out his palms in the from of a green ray of electric light. The ray blasted through one of Patricks sheilds, and went flying at Forrest. The bald man lunged for the ground, shocked. Within a second he was back on his feet, firing spheres at Victor. Orbs collided and rays darted. The battle had no doubt, reached its climax.

Victor tried to glance at Patrick and Cedric as much as possible. But the trained Forrest was keeping him busy. The other two didnt seem to make much progress either. Out of now where something collided with Forrest, sending him to the ground. It took Victor a short second to realise it was Dee.  Patrick was now attempting to produce a dome-like sheild around the two tangled bodies. Victor could see the faint outline of the sheild forming, and tried to help. His efforts seemed to be working as the dome grew less transperant.

"Hold them!" screamed Pat over the chaos that was being created by the battling men. With that he left Victor, and joined Cedric, trying to defeat Derek.  Victor blocked out everything, and focused all of his attention on the dome. Forrest was furiously trying to breach his imprisonment as Dee lay there, soundless.  Victor was unable to see the womans face, but judging from her awkward position she was unconscious.

*sorry for  bad spelling

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On August 12th 2007 bluberry5806 Said :
bluberry5806 I FREAKING CARE THIS STORY IS AMAZING AND IT IS REACHING IT'S BEST IF YOU STOP WRITING I WILL CRY FOR DAYS. YOU ARE DOING GREAT PLEASE KEEP GOING IF YOU NEED ANY HELP LET ME KNOW ANYWAY GOOD JOB AND ADIOS
On August 8th 2007 KiddieWishes Said :
KiddieWishes we made a deal. a deal!! if you stop Victor, i stop Tenuous Memories! i want to know wat happens!!! ^_^
On August 7th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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very good!...no dont freekin stop!!! lol
On August 7th 2007 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 I care you need to keep going please!!!!!
On August 7th 2007 oreoash Said :
oreoash I think this will be my last one, well on here anywho. Its getting long. hehe, so Im going to stop...unless no one wants me to. but im sure no one cares :(