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***"We need to get out of here," grumbled Cedric as he lifted the woman to her feet. "We need to call the police, my cellphone is in my-""No police." Cedric ordered.***
"What, are you crazy, we need help, those people are dead," she said pointing at the old couple and the girls mom. The girl gave a soft whimper, moving closer to Victor. Cedric sighed.
"No police, alright! None! We need to get out of here, and quick!"
"But-'"
"Listen," Patrick grumbled. the woman turned to him, "those men and that woman, will kill us before any police get here, we need to go, and we need to go NOW!"
"Who are you people?" the woman asked, yanking her arm from Cedric.
"Alrght, you stay!" Cedric grumbled, pickig up the womans purse. He shoved his hand inside, yanking out her phone.
"hey, what are you doing! You have no-" she gasped as Cedric dropped the phone and slamed his foot down onto it, crushing it into peices.
"How dare you!" she screamed. Cedric payed her no attention. He rushed down towards Victor and Patrick.
"We need to go, we cant carry him along!" he said simply.
"What, Im not leaving him!"protested Victor, placing his hand on the mans chest.
"We-" began Cedric loudly.
"Cedric," interupted Patrick, "we cant leave him, if it werent for us-"
"Alright, dammit!" Cedric huffed. He knelt down picking up the man like a baby.
"Lets move," he ordered. As they made their way out the crumbled bus the woman cried for them to wait.
"Now your coming?" asked Cedric.
"Well I'd rather be with you then with those freaks."
They forced their way out the bus, and into the trees. The woman had a scarf soaked with blood tied tighltly around her arm, and a bruise on the bottom of her cheek. Her bottom lip was busted, and her hand was slightly cut. The girl managed to survive with a busted lip and a small cut on her forhead. She also had a large bruise on her forarm. The unconscious man still had his glasses, but the were nearly falling off his bloody nose. His head was bruised and he had bloody nuckles.
"Is his nose broken?" asked Victor.
"No, not that I can tell." replied Cedric. Cedric had a cut under his eye, and his arm was covered in blood. Pat had a limp, besides that he was unsceathed. Victor had a bruise near his hairline, and he had bit his tongue. He also bruised his knee, but it wasnt bad.
"We cant get away in time," Victor said, as he stumbled threw the trees, clutching the girls hand.
"Hes right!" cried the woman. Just then there was a loud boom from behind them. Everyone turned in shock.
"I put sheilds on the bus, that way they waist time thinking we are inside," whispered Cedric, "so everyone move quick, and be as silent as possible."
***sry for bad spelling! i know IM HORRIBLE***
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| On July 20th 2007 jenni24014 Said : | |
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great chapter! let me know when more is up! |
| On July 8th 2007 bluberry5806 Said : | |
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Oh You Are Not Horrible. Im horrible I got a marshmallow stuck up my nose once thats worse that not being able to spell. Well enough of that great job as usual. My only advice is that the story has been kind of slowing down. If you remember I said this story is best with a lot happening. The last couple have been slower. Which makes me want more. You've put alot of stuff in some and less in others. Which is fine it's still good. Just leaves you wanting more. I hope this isnt mean im not trying to be. Im just trying to help you and if im too mean let me know ill be nicer. Well this is way too long so i will say nice job once again and im looking forward to the next one. |
| On July 7th 2007 sexyqtpie Said : | |
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awesome! le tme no when the next one is up! |
| On July 6th 2007 e2bella Said : | |
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let me know when the next is up! |
| On July 1st 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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good chapter, tell me when there's more |
| On July 1st 2007 grassfairy02 Said : | |
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keep me posted |
| On June 30th 2007 KiddieWishes Said : | |
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tell me when the next is up[: |


