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Victor part 7

Creative Created on 6-21-07 Views(163) Story Rating G

***"Victor honey," she said soothingly. She stood up straight to look her son in the eye. "your...your adobted.""What! What do you mean im adobted?"***

  "This is exactly why he should have known. This is why you should have told him dammit! We need to leave!" growled Cedric.

  "Dammit Cedric, you werent even supposed to come untill he was sixteen!" Vern yelled.

   "His birthday is in two more weeks! How much longer did you plan on waiting to tell him!" argued Cedric. Victor was standing there staring at his parents.

   "Can someone please tell me what is going on!" he begged.

   Vern sat down on the love seat. "you were adopted but not from any adoption agency," he sighed.  Victor went down and sat on the sofa, next to his sister, and Beverly went to sit with her husband.

  "You see honey," his mother sighed, "You dont come from this world."

  "You come from a place called Lundine.  Thats where they come from," Vern said pointing towards Cedric and Patrick, whom had come to stand nearer.

   "Victor, your very important to Lundine. Your royalty. They sent you and your sister away." Beverly stated

   "What?" gasped Courtney.

   "Oh, sorry dear, I dont mean you.  Victor has a real sister." Beverly confirmed.

   "Why did they send me away?" asked Victor.

   "Your parents were killed," spoke Cedric quickly. "so we sent you and your sister away for protection.  Everyone would have been after you two, trying to kill you! You were two of the very few people related to the King and Queen. Everyone else had been, or was being killed off, along with your parents."

   "By who?" questioned Victor.

   "By the people whom work along with Dee. Dee, is the second in command of the group whom call themselfs, The True Army." Cedric informed.

    "The T.A believe that it is unfair to let this world exsist." Patrick said. "Thay think we should go to war. Complelty obliterate everyone, and take command of Earth."

    "Not only your world, but the other one as well." continued Cedric, "You see, there is this world, our world, and another world called Yentrock. Yours is simply called Earth.  Its hard to explain how these three worlds co-exist, so we wont get into that right now.  All you need to know is that you, your sister, and very few other people are in line to be King and/or Queen. You are the first, because you are directly related, and you are older then your sister by a year."

    "What do you mean directly related?" asked Victor.

    "Your parents, were the King and Queen of Lundine...that makes you the prince lad."  Cedric answered.

    "This is all so confusing," grumbled Victor, holding his face in his hands.

    "Alright then, we'll see if this helps," began Patrick. "There are three worlds! Earth, Lundine, and Yentrock! Lundine...Your parents, whom are dead, were King and Queen of Lundine. As you know, your world doesnt simply have one king and one queen to rule over all places. This is because our world, is much smaller. In Lundine we can use magic, something people in your world dont have.  We call you mortals.

     "Yentrock... It isnt as small as Lundine, but its not developed.  We sent you here, because Yentrock is mostly Volcanoes, and empty land.  Very few people live there. But Yentrock has nothing to do with you. Earth...Earth is the only world, that does not know it coexist with two other worlds." Patrick was speaking very quickly. "The T.A, want to take control over Earth because your intelligence, is much greater then ours. We dont have cars, and electricity, or airplanes. They think if we dont take over, then Earth will find out about Lundine's existence and destroy it."

    "Alright," said Victor. "but why am I so important, cant someone else become King?"

    "Well yes," Cedric sighed. "But the Royal family is the family with the greatest magical power."

    "So!" protested Victor. "obviously other people like Dee, and like you use magic...why does it matter if the royal family has more?"

    "Because," Cedric said sternly, "Our world is ending.  Our world was created long ago by a man named Gabriel Zabiah. His childrens, childrens, children, etecetera....were the royal family.  Your true name is Victor Zabiah. You are his great great great great great grand son. Gabriel based the existence of Lundine on magic."

     "What he is saying Victor," said Patrick, "is that our world could not exist without magic.  Once every year, for the past 500 years, the Royal family, gathered in a place called the chambers.  They put magic into the daimonds, that are in the chambers, and that is what kept our world going.  Those diamonds, are like Earths core.  With out it, our world would not exist.  The only people whom can give power to the diamonds are members of thr royal family."

     "Thats crazy!" Victor protested, "the royal family has to end oventually.  It has already been 500 years, how long do you exspect the royal family to last?"

      "Gabriel knew that." Cedric spoke, "he knew his descendants wouldnt last forever. It is said that after 550 years, the world would no longer need magic.  No one knows how or why.  All we know, is that we havent had a gathering in the chambers, in 6 years Victor. Six years! And the last one, only had three people there to do it! They were distant relatives too. Lundine has been having earthquakes everyday! And its been getting harder to breath. The sky isnt even blue any more.  Its turning to a light purple. The sun is coming up later, and going down earlier everyday."

     "Okay, so, I am one of the most direct desindants of Gabriel Zabiah, you need me to be in this chamber gathering thing, in order to save your world?"

    "Exactly," said Cedric.

    "How many people do you have to help with the chamber gathering?" asked Victor.

     "You, your sister Simone, your 4th cousin Gregory, your uncle Brian,  your 2nd cousin Fernard, and your cousin Addison."

     "Thats only six of us!" said Victor.

     "Yes, we would have eight, but your cousin's Derek and Callie were killed by the T.A a few weeks ago." Cedric sighed.

    "Will I come back?" asked Victor, "if I go with you, will I come back?"

 

*I know its long, sry!! and sry for any mispelled words.!!!*       

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On June 30th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 nice story :D
On June 25th 2007 jenni24014 Said :
jenni24014 cool story.. moving on.. :) nice job!
On June 21st 2007 KiddieWishes Said :
KiddieWishes oooo...so original[: loves it!
On June 21st 2007 bluberry5806 Said :
bluberry5806 Still Amazing!!!!!! Just one thing adopted is spelled with a p not a b. That is the only negative I have. Keep up the good work!!!!
On June 21st 2007 grassfairy02 Said :
grassfairy02 cool. keep me posted
On June 21st 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie Its great! I love it! You should send this into a publishing company i really think it wouold take off. Amazing! Please keep me posted *KUDOS*
On June 21st 2007 e2bella Said :
e2bella It wasn't confusing lol I liked it!!
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xxcassiejayxx good, i like it
On June 21st 2007 oreoash Said :
oreoash i tried to make it so it wouldnt be confusing!