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With Me

Other Created on 2-9-08 Views(137) Story Rating G

Well, the time comes and goes faster than you think and before you know it you're tossed away for the newer and more efficient and better supplied. And all you get is the realization that you've swallowed more dust than you can chew, and you'd barely noticed until you started to choke. Trust me, it's not a nice feeling. Maybe it's because you didn't think it'd matter in the first place,  but it did, and way more than you thought. But the harder you try, you'll get better in one direction but lose another and then some. Just don't think that you're the only one, because you and I are two in a million and the rest count for less than half. The feeling you get when you think your best is only because you're earnest in the pleasing order and you're still last in line because everyone can see your plastic face and step in front of you just so easily, yet you're unable to grasp whatever foothold on reality since you're already deep into the losing side of the mirage of sleep. Shining like a pearl in the hands of a beast surrounded in a nest of lies, you've created the perfect home inside your heart that well never leave you without doubt. What you're left with though, is not what your mind or the hand in your heart is holding, but the remnants of your battered and ancient soul that has suffered so dearly that you don't know, and it's bleeding immortally with one beginning, no end and certainly no beginning of an end to the path you've given yourself in this long, twisted, ungrateful, eternal road, politely called the journey of life.

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On June 30th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia You are a talented writer.I love reading it,it's so inspiring and relieving to know that i am not alone feeling very down sometimes.That i'm not the only one who cry and things just don't happen the way we want them to be.It's just life......
On May 23rd 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei Once again, an amazing read. Keep writing :-)
On May 8th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet another interesting read
On February 12th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Fantastic. I'm glad that I read this, thanks.
On February 11th 2008 surefirefailur Said :
surefirefailur What a refreshing, intelligent read in a sea of mediocrity! I loved it. The delivery is good.
On February 11th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess I am impressed with your words, I couldnt stop reading it. Just one suggestion, please make the letters in bold or bigger. Some of us need glasses or just have a hard time reading when its all cramped together. But hey, I loved every word.
On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Whoa. What a profound and interesting look into your mind. That was a journey in itself!
On February 10th 2008 jazzyacorn Said :
jazzyacorn Bloody hell! Whooa, this is the sort of feeling that fuels me to either feel defeated or motivates me to beat,smash. Like a page ripped out of my diary, except nothing could capture the same passion. Oh yeah!->bleeding immortally with one beginning, no end! You have quite the talent with imagery; I encourage you to keep writing!
On February 9th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic This is awesome.
On February 9th 2008 amptone Said :
amptone :) great read girl.