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Theadore's man...My dream Man...

Creative Created on 8-8-07 Views(154) Story Rating G

So even though I didn’t get to ride to school with my soul mate….I did get to with my best friend…Brody lives next door so it’s really convenient when I need a ride…which is often seeing as how I’ve never had one boyfriend in my life!! Not one!! “Hey” I said as he pulled up “Hey…so why’d u need a ride on such short notice”…”Well…Bryce offered me a ride at first…but then the wicked witch came out and ruined it for me!!” “OOO. .Poor Kennedy….Theodore’s boyfriend seems to like his girlfriend more than her sister.” He was joking…but he was serious too….He never really liked Bryce…he thought he was “to full of himself”..Which if he looked like Bryce I’m sure he would be too.. I play slapped him and we both laughed…even though I knew he was somewhat serious.

“So…Did u do your Lit homework last night”..I asked Brody ..”No…” “And why not” “I was working out” I looked over at him like he had just grown horns….” You were working out!?” He frowned a bit and replied…”Yea…is that so hard to believe?” “No…It’s just kind of not like you…” “People change Kennedy….Cya” and he walked off to homeroom….And has he was walking away…weird enough…I noticed that his biceps had gotten quite a bit bigger…he was acting very strange…..But all those thoughts were wiped away once I saw Bryce’s long black silky hair covering part of his bright blue eyes as he was talking to Mr. Mickenzie. I was paying so much attention to this Greek god…*(Well…close enough to one) that I didn’t notice the little yellow sign saying “Caution: Wet Floor”…and “Thump!!”…yea…that would be my butt hitting the newly mopped marble floor….I must have hit my head and passed out because the last thing I remember thinking was how jealous I was of Mr. Mickenzie was the one talking to Bryce and not me…

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On September 7th 2007 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 poor kennedy!!
On August 9th 2007 ybeth09 Said :
ybeth09 i hope she ends up with brody!! he seems like a great guy =] great story!
On August 9th 2007 oreoash Said :
oreoash OH MY GOSH. hehe....i think she might date brody. also, whatch the "...". But great job
On August 9th 2007 Hellcro Said :
Hellcro *evil grin* I smell drama. KEEP ME POSTED!
On August 8th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 I like this. I can't help but feel as if Brody might have a thing for our girl here... and I think I might be rooting for him too! Keep me posted plz!
On August 8th 2007 jdwluver Said :
jdwluver sounds great. but work on the transitions try less dots. keep me posted
On August 8th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz i like this =) you're really good, but like the other people said in the comments, work on the dots thing! other than that, great plot...hahaha i just love the jealous sister type stories. you've got me hooked, and now its my turn to ask you to let me know when the next ones up! hahaha oh yeah i have a question. do you think i should continue on my stories? it seems like im losing fans.
On August 8th 2007 twilight023 Said :
twilight023 good i like it
On August 8th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx i really do like your style of writing, you are good :)
On August 8th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 hahahahahahhahahhahahahahahhahahahaha!!!! OMG i freakin lov this!=) plz keep me posted!!!!!!!!!!