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Anything But Orange
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 Created on 10-2-08
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Anything but Orange
Crow’s Preface,
It all started at the jeweled glow of a sunset. The glow flooding the jaded city with color. Their story all started on the sunset of a day not significant to anything. But if I’m telling it in remembrance of them, they wouldn’t want me to tell it with to much detail, they were both get to the point kind of people. Rebecca and Derrick, we were just a rag tag team of bounty hunters, and them with a pair of pasts they had to forget. They were good with forgetting but… the funny thing about the past. It has a way of coming back to get even with you.
He was a cop who was caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. He was brought back to life in a way. After that, he opened his eyes and saw the world, maybe disorientated but still he saw it as a different person, and completely changed his out looks. Funny thing about morals they have a way of changeling with and explosion and your own death.
She was an off the grid thought as nails bounty hunter, living by her own rules in her car, and liking it. She was just alone, but she never thought anything about it. Until she made a deal with the devil, and realized the life in an organized crime family wasn’t for her. After that, she ran, before the devil could collect. Funny thing about running eventually you have to collapse.
What brought us together, coincidence, necessity, fate, call it what ever you want. But eventually we stepped it in to deep. Funny thing about walking in water, eventually it comes in over you head.
(FF, Fun Fact, the preface is told by the character named Crow, she is one of the main characters who is telling the story, the wrong time but it is told mostly by the two main characters Devrick and Rue. Crow narates the Preface and the Epilogue. If it’s never clear let me know. And the title will make sense eventually.)
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Please Login to post comments| On November 26th 2008 missy3006 Said : | |
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so far in this part of the story there are many holes in it. you tell some of whats going on but in no detail. some times that will keep a reader curious but some of them need filling. like how he came back to life, this part needs to be filled in on this part of the story so that we dont get confused later and can understand the story better. |
| On November 26th 2008 missy3006 Said : | |
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so far in this part of the story there are many holes in it. you tell some of whats going on but in no detail. some times that will keep a reader curious but some of them need filling. like how he came back to life, this part needs to be filled in on this part of the story so that we dont get confused later and can understand the story better. |
| On November 26th 2008 missy3006 Said : | |
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so far in this part of the story there are many holes in it. you tell some of whats going on but in no detail. some times that will keep a reader curious but some of them need filling. like how he came back to life, this part needs to be filled in on this part of the story so that we dont get confused later and can understand the story better. |
| On October 9th 2008 olchii Said : | |
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my brother thought crow was a guy to. its really acronym. Crastina Ree Oliver Williams, i had a friend really named that, Crastina Ree, middle name Oliver, last name Williams. so i thought it was perfict for the story, thought she is nothing like the cherictor in the story. |
| On October 9th 2008 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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I really like how you have started it off...I thought Crow was a guy haha. My mistake :) Also there are a few grammar mistakes, but that can be cleaned up with spell check and grammar check :) Awesome start :) Look forward to reading more! |
| On October 2nd 2008 watersfall Said : | |
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Dude, the names are awesome. kmp |
