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Far From Running
This is a story about a girl who to a school that’s not a school but with dorm rooms her name is Eliza and her friend aquanett and how Eliza met her dream man but find something that might change her life!!!!!!!!!!!
As Eliza and aquanett walk down side walk with bags and suitcases in there hand as they talk about what they would do there they stop and waited for the bus to come and pick them up. “ aquanett if you were millionaire what would you do with your money” “I would buy stocks and give some of the money to the animals who need help and buy clothes and just wave some in Vanessa face” both of them giggled. Vanessa was not there biggest fan she would act she own the place they stop giggling when the bus came they got on the bus. the doors closed and then grabbed the seat they saw it was a early bus they were first as soon the bus closed they doors a hand open the doors and got in it was Vanessa mean behind “ look what devil kick out” Vanessa step up talked to the bus diver in a mean sound “ next time leave the doors open “she walk past a couple of seat then Eliza and aquanett began to talk to each other and Vanessa stop their talking “well well what do you know the country black girls like your clothes” she walked to the middle of the bus and sat down the bus doors closed and we were off!
A day later we chose our rooms Eliza chose a fancy room aquanett chose the room next door to Eliza they knew that they were not going to be in the same room together after that the list went up to see who was going to be their roommate Eliza and aquanett check the list when Eliza look that the list she was surprised “ okay let see…Nathan who’s Nathan ? Aqua?” aqua shrugged then this boy walked up behind Eliza “excuse me “ Eliza turned around and just paused aqua snapped her fingers in front Eliza face “sorry “ “ uh…okay lets see who I’ m with Eliza nice name “ Eliza smiled at aqua Eliza mind was talking to her speak ,speak “thanks “Eliza said finally “oh your Eliza nice to meet you” “nice to meet you to” they stop talking then Nathan ask Eliza where was there room was when he left Eliza and aqua looked at each other then looked at his butt “ bam!!!” “I can not believe we got cute roommates girl this is going to cheetah-licous” at night Eliza was in the bath room brushing her hair Nathan was already in bed the bad part was there was only one bed so two people had two sleep in the one bed Eliza walk out the bath room wearing a night gown with blue lace it was pink she walk over to the bed lift the covers over her chest “night” “night”
The next morning Eliza was back in the bathroom she was doing her hair and wore dark pink dress with a head band then going over aqua’s dorm she close the door quietly because Nathan was still in the bed when she closed the door she quickly got a paper of what classes Eliza and Nathan would be in Eliza had two classes with aqua and the rest of the classes was with Nathan Eliza was shocked then she ran over to aqua’s dorm and knock on the door “what what happened girl” “look at my classes ten classes and two …two classes and the rest of the classes with him” as soon as possible aqua yanked Eliza in when Nathan walked out of room but when he look up he saw Eliza being took in he knock on the door “ hi is Eliza in there” “yeah she is” aqua was telling him “well can you ask her if I can get the sheet with my classes on it” “sure wait here” “okay” aqua closed the door and ran over to Eliza “he’s here he wants the sheet” “ well here” aqua took the sheet to the door and Nathan was still there “ thanks… is Eliza okay” “yeah it a girl talk” ‘okay bye” “bye” aqua closed the door and walk over Eliza as Eliza just sat there with her eyes buck wide open “I can not believe it aqua he so cute” as they where talking Nathan was walking over back to aqua dorm and over heard so he put his ear to the door “Nathan is really cute I don’t know what to say” “well Eliza I thought you like brad “ brad was this guy that didn’t notice Eliza “ well he was white I like Nathan because fine ,cute ,and prefect and fine and has caramel skin and plus he has a tush of a god!!!” Nathan smiled then he left to dorm and called his friend and told him what he heard after that they went to there classes and at lunch Nathan sat next to Eliza and talked “hi Eliza” “hi Nathan how ya doing?” “fine you?” “fine” Eliza was sitting next to Nathan and aqua Eliza look at aqua and she shrugged “uh…Nathan” Nathan was happy when she said something “yeah!” “could you excuse us for a second” “sure” Eliza drag aqua away from the table “why won’t he talk” hey Eliza at lest he saying a little bit” “true” when they were talking Nathan was talking to himself “com on ask her out okay here she come you can do this” Eliza and aqua sat back down and Nathan just blurted it out “WILL YOU ……” he notice that he was yelling the he spoke in a normal voices “sorry about that” “it’s okay what where you going to say” then Nathan ask her if they could speak to her alone so when lunch was over Nathan went into the there room then she panic and grabbed aqua “ aqua he wants to talk to me what do I do I’m losing my mind here” “ okay Eliza calm down just breath okay breath” “BREATH you want me to…” as she was saying that aqua just pushed her in the room with Nathan she calm down and well talked “ hi what did you want to say” Nathan took a deep breath and exhaled “ will you go out with me” Eliza eyes open wide and couldn’t speak then just got out “yeah, yes ,sure” she could not believe it she ran over to aqua room and knock until aqua open the door Eliza ran in “ what’s wrong” “ aqua can you go shopping with me” “why” Eliza screamed to the top of her lung’s “ Nathan just ask me out “wow that was quick” both of them giggled so they went off-campus to go shopping as aqua was driving Eliza to the mall “ so where is he taking you” “ I don’t know but can I sleep over your dorm” “ WHAT” aqua was curious “ well I don’t want it to be weird sleeping in bed with a boy who ask you out for the first time” aqua was puzzled “ I…never thought of it that way” when they where at the mall they could spend money as much as they want because they had one thousand dollars in each store when aqua won the sweepstakes then buying begins they started to try on cloths. Eliza came out of dressing room wearing a white dress that flair out at the bottom “ well what do think” aqua came out wearing the same thing even it was made out of blue jeans with a belt at the top both of them laugh so they bought the dresses and they were walking in they mall “Eliza do know what we have to do now “ what” aqua drag Eliza to the hair wash and got a surprise “ WHAT…. you want me to dye my hair are you nuts” “ you have to” but Eliza did it “so Eliza what color do you want” “well since I’m doing this I’m thinking a little bit of dark and light pink but…just on the front and let’s have it flipped out wards” “ well you really thought this past me” “ well so” it didn’t matter Eliza an hour later Eliza hair was looking good “ dang Eliza” “ well aqua is it good” “ honey it’s looking cheetah -licous” after that Eliza bought a pink dress with a zipper in the back “ aqua do you think I should of bought this dress “ Eliza come on the dye in your hair is pink” “ oh…my…god” aqua turned around and saw vannase walking toward them wearing a shiny dress and blue jeans Eliza and aqua snickered as soon as vannsae came up to them they stop laughing as quick as a flash “hello” “ya…hey… umm nice outfit” aqua said trying to hold down her laugh but Eliza was on the floor vannase look confused then her eyes buck out and ran off into a store aqua was on the floor and Eliza almost past out form running out of air because she didn’t stop laughing but she stop for air “aqua I got to tell you something” “what?” “aqua this dye is just color and I’m taken it out when I get to the dorm” aqua’s lip drop so fast Eliza couldn’t even see it but aqua left the store and they were at the car when they saw Vanessa in a different outfit running to the car making sure nobody saw her but any way Eliza and aqua went back to there dorms but Eliza went over aqua’s dorm room wash out the pink color that was in her hair “Eliza I don’t know why you got the color in your hair if you were going to wash it out any way” “because aqua what if he comes and were going some were and I’m looking like a freak!!!!” “good point” so after that Eliza and aqua went to bed wondering where was Nathan going to take Eliza and the date tomorrow and they talk them self to sleep.
The next day Eliza up and ready and aqua was still sleep and Eliza didn’t want to wait for her to wake up so she went to her dorm and got dress went to class and was sitting next to Nathan and could not stop looking at each other but Nathan and Eliza couldn’t tell each other that they had x-rated dreams a bout each other but then when class was over Eliza went back to aqua’s dorm and told what happen in class and told her the dream she had about him and her aqua eyes and her mouth was wide open when Eliza got done telling her “ooooookay did not need to know all that” “sorry aqua what I’m I going to do about this the date is to night!!!” “Eliza chill what you need to do is look fine when u walk in that room now lets work it” aqua and Eliza went to work the did their hair did the nails ,lips, eyes every thing and by the time they where done it was time for the date. Nathan was pacing in his room waiting for Eliza when Eliza walk right in the room “hi!!” she said nervously “hhhhay” he said rubbing his neck “so where are we going” Nathan smiled and pulled out a box “what is that” “open it” Eliza open it and pulled out the prettiest red dress “oh my god this so cute “ “were going tango dancing” Nathan said Eliza jumped up and hugged him so, Nathan and Eliza went off campus and got in a car and went tangoing when they got there Eliza had her dress on and they sat down and ate and heard some tangoing music and tango the first song they heard they were on the dance floor and they were the star on the dance floor people clapping made Eliza and Nathan feel happy that they came over after that they got in the car and Nathan was driving and Eliza was looking at the window and talking to Nathan she look down and saw a bulge in Nathan pants and Eliza’s eyes open wide then she smiled ,they got back to campus they got in the room Nathan sat down on the bed and Eliza was in the bath room looking for a blind fold when she got blind fold she called aqua from the bath room “aqua it’s me I’m back from our date what do I do” “girl I’m sick of you asking me what u should do but gotta what it girl go ahead and get with your man” before Eliza could say any thing aqua hung up so Eliza just walk out of the bath room and took a deep breath and went lose she didn’t even feel like her self like her body was taking over by this goddess of lust Nathan didn’t see Eliza walk out of the bath room so Eliza went behind Nathan had the blind fold out and lowered it over Nathan’s eye’s “what the…” he said “shh relax Nathan just enjoy” Eliza went around the bed in front of Nathan ,push him on to the bed and started to strip down in to something a little more comfortable but she was in the bath room she walk out of the bath room wearing a pink bra with black lace on the rim the same with the underwear Eliza walk over to the side of the bed in which Nathan was on and started to unbutton his shirt Nathan was breathing in deep when Eliza open up Nathan shirt his body was glisten under the light Nathan had the blind fold over his eyes Eliza ran her hand a crossed Nathan six Pac. “oooh that must feel nice” “it does” he smiled Eliza slowly unzipped Nathan pants saw Nathan’s …well you know I’m not going tell you the details but Eliza and Nathan made love for the rest of the night .
The next day Eliza was her self no more lust goddess and Nathan well with out him knowing he made love to a virgin last night but Eliza didn’t tell him so Eliza woke and walk over to aqua’s dorm “hey Eliza-” Eliza ran in side with a big smile on her face “guess who lost their virginity “ aqua was puzzled…..for a second then she had a smile her face and they both screamed of happiness “oh my god how,when,where wait a minute who?” “aqua you know who” “ohhhhhh I get it now “ “yeah” “well tell me was it good “ “well it was ……well great I just completely fantastic” “ well that’s what happens when you tell the man that you’re a virgin” Eliza face scrunched up “you did tell him….did you” “well no didn’t get to tell him when I wanted to tell him I became so kind of lust goddess” “ELIZA you are a virgin” “I’m sorry I didn’t know I’m supposed to tell him I’m a virgin” oh well so did it hurt” Eliza think for a second “uhhh yeah ..well not that much it felt like falling in between bars” aqua scrunched her face up “uh if I had one word to say it would be…….OW” aqua and Eliza laughed. After that Nathan and Eliza have been closer than ever kissing I where no one could see them the play there where in they would always be in it as the stars and they had Romeo and Juliet but when Nathan was alone he felt as if someone was watching him
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this is part of the book i'm wirting hope u lik it |


