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bloody walls
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 Created on 6-11-08
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the young man said looking at the piles of bloody
Bodies piled on top of each other.
Then he saw three young ladies passed out on the floor, covered in blood, they moved only slightly, he ran over to the first girl he could see, a girl with reddish orange hair in a red dress, she laid right next to a little blond haired boy.
PT.2
Hello can you speak? he said with despair in his voice then walk over
To the girl with short brown hair & her cheeks were flushed with red,
She wore a dark, dark green dress, he tapped her shoulder, her eyes started to flutter, you alright? he said, she slowly shook her head, but not in response,
He left her to go to the last one that laid thereon the floor in a deep…blood red dress (note: there is a difference I know, I looked it up, back to the story)
He bent down to her side, his heart flipped & skipped a few beats, he
Caressed her cheek and stroked her long black hair that
Felt like silk. miss, miss he said in a whisper to her ear.
saiya’s pov.
miss, miss he said as a whisper making saiya
qiver, oh great a human, why
does it always happen to me, well I better
wake up”
she thought to her slef rudley,
she fakly but slowly open her eyes
to a young man, look about her age, brown cruly,puffy hair, light skinned & pretty brown eyes, okay I resent that last thought,
he is hot hot HOT!,
she lifted her slef up to pertend she didn’t know what happen, she lifted her hand to make it seem
out of saiyas pov
yuki & aisu had felt saiya get up , so yuki (the copy cat) slowly ris up along with aisu.
pt. 3
he look over to see the other two girls faintly
lift their bodies up.
are you ladies okay?
the girls turned to see the boy and shook their heads. he looked at saiya you okay?
he said soflty
saiya: yes
boy: good, you three able to stand.
they were already standing up
he help saiya satnd up, even though she was perfectly capable of standing.
(she just had a ballroom full of demons)
boy: we need to leave.
saiya: why
thena large boom sounded through the ballroom
boy: that’s why
saiya: okay we need to go now
they turned to see yuki & aisu already running away and disappering
boy: come on lets go
he siad running while holding her hand , then catching up with aisu and yuki letting go of hand,
saiiya stop and turned to see that they had been running down a corridoor the doors they had went pass open up and hunters were running towards her, aisu and yuki ran up to her side.
they raised their hands towards the hunters
and called out
girls: powers of the witches rise from the land
help us catch these hunters with a elastic band.
Making the hunters fly back and hit the wall.
boy: come on lets go we have to jump out the window.
they look at him then at the window that if you looked out the lake was right there.
they ran and jumped out the window
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Please Login to post comments| On June 11th 2008 shelbzjrox Said : | |
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i really like it but u really need to work on ur grammar. |
| On June 11th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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ummm rushed and hurried i hope that you dont have it so confuding next time and i also hope that you keep me posted on this story bcuz i really like it |
