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A nite at the club ***half of whole story***

Romance Created on 10-31-07 Views(66) Story Rating G

A nite at the club

 

Alan and his boys were going to a club they all went in a hummer they got in the club and

Sat down ordered their drinks and started to talk about how big and curly alan’s hair was and looking at girls butt’s ,watching women dance and just doing what men do best.

Alan was laughing at what one of the guys had said and just stop looking at the d.j interrupting everything “oh snap looks like we have a dance off over here” “alright I going over to see it’ll bye right back”

Alan got up went to the dance floor and watch the girls dance lovin the way they move then he look up at the d.j and had almost all of the girls up there and he’s giving them something.

 

Christine is up on the stage with almost every single girl that was on the floor, the d.j went down the line and handed out nite vision glasses he said that she had to get the capes for the women and so on and said that she had flip off the switch and then u do your thing he handed out blindfolds as well so , Christine was there with her friend and she was next to layla and pointed to alan an said what she had on was perfect she had on the baby phat short jean jumpsuit short- sleeve with 3 gold buttons and curly long hair and thin but big hoop earrings she wanted the first guy she saw and she saw alan one look and she wanted him badly she was about to scream.

 

 

Alan didn’t see Christine at all then he started to dance a little then it happen he saw people in capes it’s a lot he them going over the light switch a hand reach out from under a cape and place it on the bar then came a voice

 

OKAY BOYS SHOW OF HANDS…WHO CAN SEE IN THE DARK

AND THEN WENT COMEPLETLY DARK

WE CAN !!!!

 

Then came laughter out of the darkness .

 

 

Christine was the first one to have her goggles on and walk behind alan and put the blindfold on

Come on, what the.., she said nothing more she held his hand and took him into a room and push up against wall and kiss him over and over again and touch him all over and alan kiss her back ,They kiss and touch each other she moaned when he touch her she stopped kiss him and took him to balcony outside and kiss more and touch more it almost look liked they were having sex and then it started to rain alan’s hair flopped down an still had his blindfold on and by now he thinks he knows what going on because of what song there playing Christine hair got super wet and alan push her closer and push her up against the rock bar and pick her up she wrap her legs around alan waist and Christine grinded up against alan’s rock hard dick alan moan and grabbed Christine ass hard and yanked her close the songs almost over I need to get u back come on alan didn’t know what was going on but he was happy a few mins. Later there were back at the center of the club and they already had lined up the men and ask them what happen they still had the blindfolds on but they could take them off alan was the fourth person to talk he said he had a great time with this amazing girl that he didn’t even know who it was and that he would like to go out with her Christine smile looks like u got the good girl go get the d.j said come on up, okay okay, she walk up the stair her hair was still wet but curled back up just then alan had a huge smile upon his face hi names Christine,……uh I mean, alan names alan , haha your really funny uh come with me he took his hand and lead him down the stair and kiss him Christine where r u go…..oh never mind, hey um let go to my house if u want, before he could any thing else she was out the door alan quickly grab the keys to truck and ran out the door they drove to the house they rush in to the house practically naked alan had a huge house he carried Christine up the stairs and bust through the door and landed on the bed!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Christine laid on the bed waiting for alan she had her nothing on up her bra and underwear alan got on top of Christine and kissed her have u done this before, no but I can’t wait no more I want u in me now!!! she pulled him in another kiss he pulled down her underwear and threw off the bed and Christine slid off alan’s boxers his was big she was scared that it would hurt but she didn’t care anymore, they kissed she made feel like a king then she look at his eyes. Those pretty brown eyes, watched him as they moved together. They blurred with pleasure as he touched her, tasted her. Those hands, so firm on the hilt of a sword. Her lips pressed against his chest, against the heart that was already lost to her. They took each other slowly , quietly, while the firelight shimmered over their bodies . There were murmurs and sighs instead words, and a long ,lazy climb instead of the frantic race. When he slipped inside her, he watched her face , watched her as they moved together for hours he moved in her over and over again he went to slow to fast then faster he was like a rollercoster up then down slow then fast Christine thought she was the luckiest girl alive. As everything in him gathered for that final leap, he watch her franticly breathing hard her hair allover the place he fell to the side she to lay on him she laid her hand on his chest and look in to each other eyes thank u I loved it.

And at the end of it he thought he’d simply fallen into her eyes.

The next morning

 

Christine woke up to find that alan wasn’t there so she walk out the room after when she pulled on what was laid out for her there was a note that said - come down stair your clothes are in the washer- she smiled she had on the a red bra and underwear and thin red long robe she he has good taste she walk out the room the house was huge she smelled something good she down the handle and was completely lost then saw a sign that said this way she followed the arrows the mansions the place was so pretty I’m surprised he lived alone HELLO, IN HERE!!!!.

She walk into a huge kitchen and saw alan cooking breakfast wow everything in a man , parents didn’t want me grow up spoiled.

Christine sat down and held a conversation with alan till he was with the food and handed her food then talk some more while they ate turns out they have a lot in common so did u get bored and went to the club too, no actually I was cleaning so much and my friends basically kidnapped me so I could have some, u and your friends live together?, yeah it’s big really big my uncle died and left the huge house to me and my friends he loved us he treated my friends like family, wow!!!! Um u wanna see something, sure why not, so alan grab the plate put them in the sink christine was just smiling for ever cause alan had no shirt on the whole time so he ran towards Christine and pick her up bridal style and carried her up the stairs and opened a door to another flight of stair he ask christine if she wanted to walk wanted him to carry her she said she’ll so he took her hand led her up the stairs and opened up another door this is a room no one knows about but me and now u he led her into a beautiful room with a balcony that had a wonderful view with that showed a beach and everything oh my god this is so pretty look at bed oh there’s candles this is so pretty I love this the room was tan and white the bed was silk she sat down on the bed and laid down she felt so happy alan was smiling and looking at christine I can see that like it, so much hey can I ask u a questions, sure, were did u get these clothes from, well long story short I thought that my ex would move in so I bought clothes for her cuzz her clothes burned in a fire and this would be her own little room she would’ve had two rooms but she I found out she cheated on me and I dumped her there’s huge walk-in closet full of designer clothes and nothing to do with them so there u go, silent then, wwwwwooooooowwwww, they laugh so hard did u want me to take u home now yeah I’m sure my friends are wondering were I am but u can come back and get if u want any time, alan smiled and said that she get new clothes from the closet that was right in front of them so Christine walk towards the double- door and opened it wasn’t a walk in closet IT WAS A ROOM!!! She could not believe it well how could it was a freakin’ room she look back and saw alan, he had the biggest smile ever she ran in to room there was clothes everywhere she didn’t know what to do she saw a cute skirt and red top one side had a sleeve and the other no sleeve she loved things liked that the skirt was blue jeans with red rhinestones down the side and on the back in hearts so he got the keys to the hummer he didn’t put shirt on she asked why he said he doesn’t need to dress to go somewhere and then come right back so then ask if she could keep the red robe because she already kept the bra and underwear on he said yes so he drove christine home when they there her house was 1 size smaller then his the windows were down so she got out and one of friends come out of the going for a run who’s that she had blue eyes and blonde hair and in a brown sweat shirt and pant oh Carla oh great she has the biggest mouht of all hey carly, she looked over to christine and looked behind her and saw a man with gray sleeping pants and no shirt on hi christine u look nice and who is that??? christine rolled her eyes okay carly this is alan, alan this is Carla, hi alan it’s nice to met u, same here so christine here’s my number and call when u want alright?, okay bye alan and bye to u Carla I’ll see u later now go!!!, oh don’t think this is over when I come back from my run I’m coming to get u so everybody left christine ran into the house and found nobody was there she guess that everybody was in there room so she ran up stairs and ran in to her room and took her clothes off and her red robe back on and ran to window and opened it she look out in to the open world and just smiled she walked towards her bed and laid on just day dream and move around a lot the n heard a knock on the door……

 

She looked at door and got and ran to closet and closed the door and turned the light off and buried herself with her clothes trying to hide from the girls hoping that they wouldn’t find her she heard the door opening to her room then she thinking about that music video with r. kelly and the closet then she giggled and shut her mouth when the closet door opened then closed back then she thought to herself why should she have to hide from her friends beside this was half of her house so she got up and opened the door to find out nobody was there so she walk out the closet door closed behind her she turned to find layla grinning evilly with her arms crossed you always liked to hide there when something happen oh u dropped something she held a piece of paper that Alan’s number on it Christine smiled and walked over to layla and took it from her okay u caught me what do u want, nothing just tell me everything and tell me where u got those clothes from Christine laugh she knew she could trust her they’ve been friends forever layla was light skinned girl she could always make a person laugh she like a mother to all of them so they all started to her momma even though they were 18.……all of them in huge house so layla laid down and listen to Christine talk un till she got the going to his house part and …….well u know so and this alan had…., yes and hurt….badly but I didn’t care and this morning I put on this and side down the stairs which was fun cuzz it was spiral stairs it was so cool then I got completely lost then he had put up sign to tell me where he was and I found him in the kitchen cooking isn’t great!!!!, wow lucky and u got new clothes, yeah hey u wanna go to the mall, yeah why not just me and u or the whole.., I’m back and who the heck was that guy and I want the truth , so Christine told Carla the whole story and she just couldn’t speak then Christine said their all going to the mall Carla said she’ll go all she had to do is take a shower and get dressed a couple of mins. They went the mall Carla, Christine, layla, savannah, Guadalupe, angela, elliana, evette and sienna , they all went to the mall to go shopping and just have fun they always went in two separate ways or in together on the way they went to get something to eat they would always talk because of how the boys would look at them and flirted with them but then they told the boys that they already had boyfriends even though they didn’t but they didn’t know about Christine they kept asking her about alan she got mad but she was playing Christine was talking to layla about how they went Mississippi then she looked around and saw alan coming this way she went bugged-eyed and turned her head he was wearing a black shirt with black jeans alittle baggy Christine said to layla when he come over here shut up layla didn’t say anything

Hi Christine I didn’t know u’d be here, well I didn’t want to stay in my house all day long so what your u doing here, but she didn’t know was that he bought her a gift uhh nothing u need know this early so who are your friends, this is Carla, layla, savannah, Guadalupe, angela, elliana, evette and sienna girls this is alan say hi, hi alan!, Christine slap her hand on her head smiling trying not to laugh alan smirking hi ladies it was nice meeting you then Christine got up and walk over to alan and whisper something in his ear maybe you should go before they kill you with questions alan look at her with bugg- eyes Christine raised her eye brows and whispered something else in his eye the were moving around trying to see what she was saying one fell out of her chair and if you do leave I’ll be sure to come over and give you a real work out and it will be better then last time alan smiled well see ya bye ladies he walk away Christine gave him a kiss goodbye she turned around to find the girls smiling what I just told him something what’s wrong with that sienna got up and walk over to Christine and put her hand on her shoulder and said you said you give him some didn’t u yes how’d u know never mind that we need to go hopping so u can look go for your man so ladies lets go hey while were doing that can go to spenser and look at the shirts sienna look at Christine girl you have change so much yes but I still look the same so the girls walk walking around buying, trying on clothes and talking and making challenges and running around trying to win after they were done they went back and Christine and the girls were in the Christine room in Christine huge bed they were watching dirty dancing Christine left the room and went in to the bath room and came thru into her closet getting ready the bathroom is connected to her closet she got dressed she wore a little see thru nightgown so her friends didn’t know she put on a trench coat, it was long and brown it look like it was going to rain so she put on a hat she decide to walk to his house it was kinda far and it was dark outside but she really didn’t care but just in case she brought her tazer gun she snuck down the stairs and look up listening to the girls laugh she smiled and shook her head put on her hat and walk out of the door…….on the way to alans house she wondered about how she was so lucky to find to find a man like him then a thunder clapped from the sky she looked up and pulled up her collar and walk as rain came pouring down on her head she looked up at the sky smiling at the heavens closing her eyes and smelling the scent of rain and decided to stay out for a while what she didn’t know someone was watching the black figure was hiding behind a tree the figure step forward and step on a twig and went back Christine heard the snapped looked around and walk away from the spot she was she put her hand in her pocket and held on to the tazer and kept on walking behind her was the figure walking behind her Christine heard the footsteps behind her she turned around to see the mystery person but it was to dark and the rain was coving up everything but the figure was gone she turned around and walked again then she heard the steps again christine got scared and ran away the figure ran after her christine heart was racing when she turned the corner she hid behind fence and took out the tazer and turned it on she walk out behind the figure rain dripping from her hat and wet who are you and why are you following me the figure turned around and said nothing and down at the tazer looking at the blue light and sparks being connected then looked back up at her who are you again she said the figure walk towards her christine walk back still holding the tazer gun in her hand stop now!!!!! the figure kept moving forward christine held the tazer and walk forward and jabbed it in the figures chest she ran while figure was bent over in pain she look back and saw nobody she stop to make sure the person was still there she went to walk back she turned back around to see the figure in front of her the figure reach out and covered her mouth and turned her around christine tried to scream but then she felt sleep and went to sleep

a few hours later christine woke breathing hard it was still night and raining she lifted her head up to find her hat was gone and that her coat has been open and to find out she on the steps of alan’s house she got up and knock on the door she pretended that nothing happen when alan open the door christine hugged him walked in and walked him up in to his room it was a very long night……………..

 

 

Christine woke up in alan arms bare naked and happy she got up from bed and wake around she thought they were alone in the house she walked out of the bedroom naked and open but in case she grab a robe and walked out she searched the halls and explored the house she came across a door with the letter “t” on it she pushed the door and her eyes bucked open with surprises she found……. Well on alan side he woke up and got up he looked around and and didn’t see christine anywhere he got up ,took a shower he wondered where christine was at he was so happy that he found a girl like that he step out and put on black sleeping pant and a black shirt he walk down the stairs, rubbing his eye when he heard a scream “
christine “ he ran all over the house till he got close to her he push the door open and found…..

 

Now guys I want you to guess what christine found in the room and what was alan hiding from her I need 5 votes 4 me 2 rite another see ya!!!!!!

 

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On November 1st 2007 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 other half!!!! lol luv it...keep me posted pleasze