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The Last Line (chapter3 prt 1)

Epic Created on 2-24-08 Views(37) Story Rating G

 

LIADAN (Lie-AH-Dan)

 

 

 

I see towers of smoke

Oh

This nightmarish thing

I know I must be dreaming

I walk through streets where devastation claims so much

I watch many craw out of wreckage

Little children call out for home

Only

There is no home

Tears fall

Hitting the street

Yet

They make no sound

I walk on

And a women catches my eye

I see her but she cannot see me

In her arms she grasps a child

Who calls for someone I do not know

The child fights her with complete strength

The mother

Desperate to console her child and quite her

Lets go

It is only then that I see what she was crying for

There is someone there

Who no longer sees this world

Beside this man the child kneels

In this moment I can hear her voice

And all of the profuse pain she carries

Pa, pa! wake up pa! don’t leave me.

Please! don’t go.

 

At this

I turn my head.

Tears

In that moment

Mine and hers Fell together

Even in this filth, the girl seemed to shine

With pure grief or beauty

I cannot tell.

She shakes the man

Who must be her father

Urging him to move

To breath

To live.

 

Lia

Liadan

Come back

Pa is gone

Come back..

Please.

 

The mother rose

And went to her child

The toddler collapsed into her mother

Wanting to inhale her like the air

~~~~~~~

 

The towers of smoke are gone

Leaving me with something that burned much like fire. It was in my chest; it was in my lungs. The morning was clear and dauntless. And for the first time in days, I heard nothing. Peace. Going over the camp with my eyes, I saw castor bending over the fire pit cooking something that smelled absolutely wonderful. Eros was still sleeping on the other side of the fire. Getting up, I stretched and yawned. The smell of cooking food drew me towards the fire. I couldn’t help it. “what did you catch? It smell wonderful.” castor never took his eyes from the flames.

rabbit and some salted fish.”

“ok sounds.. Delicious.”

We had been eating the same thing ever since or travels had begun. two weeks of rabbit. I ‘m surprised I ‘m not sick of it. “castor? How far is the border now?”

“far enough Donia” every day was the same question and the same reply. I was starting to wonder whether or not there would be a day when I didn’t have to.

 

 

 

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