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Creative Created on 2-22-08 Views(52) Story Rating G

His appearance startled me, he was absolutely gorgeous.  Why would one so gorgeous be imprisoned in this asylum?  All i knew at this moment was that i felt a strange uneasiness and attraction to this man.

After quite a few awkward introductions, we sat on a beaten up old couch, wrapped up in our own world.  I let out all my angst, i told him all my secrets, explaining to him my stalker, as well as my parents obvious distrust.  I some how hoped that by showing him my world, immersing him inside it, he would be forced into a bond, a bond that would tie him to me forever.

These thoughts scared me, even as i thought them.  I only knew him for so long and yet, i was already obsessive, perhaps i really did belong to this hell whole that we have come to call a mental hospital; i don't quite understand the term, it's as if they are actually healing us.  Truly, they just want to keep track of us, get all the weirdos in one place. a Zoo.

As i explained every dark corner of my mind, i started to question him.  Finally, i got to the big question, the question of all questions:

"Why are you here?"

he was silent for a moment, seemingly having an internal debate, whether to give me the keys to his life, be his secretkeeper.  I watched as determination pooled in his deep, lilting eyes.  In a voice like honey he explained,

"i was sent here because of 'impulsive actions'" i looked at him quizically, finally he broke down, trembling, "i killed a girl.... i honestly didn't mean to... i just... i was so mad, and she was so smug and..." the rest came in quiet murmurs to himself.

I was unsure if i should be scared, because so far, the only person i actually have felt for in my life was an impulsive jerk,

an insane man,

a murderer.

 

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On February 22nd 2008 babygurl161991 Said :
babygurl161991 ha thats what happens when you meat ppl in the mental hospital, i like it!!! kmp plz
On February 22nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 whoa thats....wow kmp plz