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My Knight Came To Me On Crutches |
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To The Soldiers & Those They Defend... |
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Suspended Passion (Alternate ending) |
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Feeling the Pain |
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Feeling the Pain
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"You're killing me! Just please, please, stopit! I can't take this anymore, please!" She cried a thousand tears before he made a single remark to her.
"I'm killing you?" He managed to let slide through his grinding teeth. "You have no idea what I'm thinking right now, do you? Huh? Do you?"
She looked up at him as he stood like a tower in front of her. She knelt on the floor with her head in her hands, makeup smeared all over her face and hands. Blood was slowly dripping from her chapped bottom lip. Her crying had quieted, but not ceased, as she still had more left in her, somewhere. "You have no idea how much it hurts me to see you this way. See you do this to me. Watch you tear me apart & rip my fuckin' heart right from my chest. You have no clue how bad you're killin' me, but yet you just stand there like you don't even care? How dare you. I want you to be real here. I want you to feel the sorry I need for you to feel. I want for you to be the sorry I'm needing you to be, and I want you to say you are as sorry as I know you have been. Then, I want for you to own up to it, take the burdens of your actions and deal with the consequences, you hear me?" She began to sob again, this time, holding her head up without losing her stare into his soul.
His pulse was racing and his fists were clenching tightly as he replied to her, "I am sorry I hurt you, but not sorry for why. I do feel the way you want me to but not half as much for myself as for you. And I have appologized twice to you now. You broke my heart when you decided to be unfaithful. I, apparently, did the same to you now, when I had decided to do something about it. My leaving is how I am dealing with the reprocussions of our actions, so don't preach to me about things you know nothing about little girl. That's what you are-a sillly, foolish, naive little girl. And I? I loved you." He closed his eyes, inhailed to hold it a few moments, then exhaled it slowly. He walked away from her, as she knelt on the floor, holding her head in her hands. She let her world walk away. He left his world destroyed.
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| On March 12th 2007 november38577 Said : | |
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Thank yas all for the input! I actually wrote this because I was listening to Rihanna's "Unfaithful" song & got caught up in it. It inspired me to write about the pain with someone's being Unfaithful, rather than the act, because it's not something you hear about as often. So-my mind wondered but I'm glad yas all liked it! Wait until I write the next story-"like, Whoah!"-is alls I can say! *mal* |
| On March 12th 2007 hooahmomma Said : | |
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Uh, Mal.....do you need to call me about something? LMAO!...j/k...?? Love you! |
| On March 10th 2007 sisybug123 Said : | |
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WOW amazing truely amazing |


