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When Darkness Falls [6]

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Created on 1-21-08

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Story Rating G

Mykal and Anistazia had been walking for about a mile when Anistazia stopped. They were down on the beach now, but in a part where almost nobody ever went. The sand was full of gravel which hurt bare feet, and the coastline had jagged rocks poking out of the water everywhere. There was one very large rock in the middle of the beach, and this was where Anistazia had taken them. Pushing on the rock, it easily moved out of the way, revealing a tunnel that was light up with red lanterns. "So you aren't blinded going into and out of the darkness. Even though you think you can see in the dark outside, that's just because your eyes are reacting to moonlight. Down here, there's nothing." Anistazia explained why the lights were red.

"I'm still hungry. Do you have ANY food on you?"

"Yeah, here." She tossed him a snickers. "I figured you'd be hungry, but I forgot, sorry."

"Who is that? Do I hear Anistazia? Why, Ani, who is that with you? A friend of yours, food, or a recruit?"

"Ah, hi Jordan. Actually, this is both a friend and a recruit. His name is Mykal, and he was 'taken' last night. Problem is, we don't know who by." In the dim red lights, Mykal could just see a tall girl, probably fifteen or sixteen years old. She had black hair (that much was obvious) and very bright eyes.

"Hi Jordan. I don't believe in vampires." Mykal bit into his snickers and stared at Jordan curiously.

"I see. Anistazia, how much does he know about us?"

"Nothing really. He wouldn't listen to me when I tried talking to him."

"I'll see if I can change his mind. Mykal," Jordan said very quietly, "Let's take a walk."

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On February 1st 2008 DGeneration619 Said :

	wow!

On January 21st 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	kmp i love the story

On January 21st 2008 groupielove Said :

	ooh i was going to say this on the first chapter thingy that it's so unsual for a guy to get bitten and turned into a vampire. the ones i've read is the ones that the girls always get bitten. it's so cool how it's a guy and not a chick this time round.

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