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Pretending Not to Care [10] {final}

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Created on 1-4-08

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Blake studied the house. He knew where he'd find Hayley.He'd been watching her the last few days since....

Looking through the window at her, Blake knew it was time to say goodbye. As he entered the room, he noticed Hayley shiver andpull a blanket around her shoulders. There was a bandage on her wrist., and Blake knew what was underneath. Attempting to take a deep breath, Blake bliked. He forgot he couldn't do that anymore. Walking over to the TV, Bllake had to think of an idea. There was Hayley's diary and a pen on the counter. Shutting off the TV and picking up the pen, Blake got Hayley's attention.

Her dad was a suspicious person, and had installed a security camera in her room. Hopefully, this would prove Hayley couldn't fake anything about what happened. As he wrote "Hi! It's me, Blake." He noticed his writing was coming out backwards. Looking at it, he got an idea. "Read it in the mirror." Blake gasped. He had only a few minutes left. Picking up the pen again, he scribbled a note to her including a short will.

"Hi! It's me, Blake. I'm okay now. I'm leaving you everything I owned. Love, Blake." Hayley read it and smiled.

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On January 4th 2008 novastarr23 Said :

	wow. i guess my spelling is why we should look at the screen when we type stuff, lol. same with the last one..

On January 4th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	Aww I'm still sad Blake died.

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