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Tragedy Created on 6-3-07 Views(99) Story Rating G

I feel back with tears rushing down my face. The pain was unbearable. All my screams were taking all the energy out of me but if I breathed through my mouth I would have drowned in my own blood. My mom came over screaming and turned me over so I could get rid of the blood in my mouth and breathe. 

Grandma Dorine was just as frantic as she ran over to a payphone and dialed 9-1-1.

"9-1-1 What's your emergency?"

"My granddaughter...I mean my friend's daughter just hit her mouth on the metal bar of a sea-saw and I think she knocked her teeth out"

"Ok calm down Miss we got it all under control"

"Not till your here you don't! She's 4 years old and she's screaming so loud."

"Ok where are you"

"We are at the park."

"Which park"

"The park right in the middle of Baltimore!"

"Ok we'll be right there."

"Please hurry"

My mom turned me over on my back again and stroked her fingers through my hair to calm me down.

After about 5 minutes, the ambulance still wasn't there and I had gotten so tired from screaming and the loss of blood. I stopped screaming even though the pain was still there. I looked around without moving my head and saw my mom to the left of me, Grandma Dorine on the sidewalk looking for the ambulance, and my sister was at my feet looking frantic and screaming"Where are my sister's teeth!" and she was crying as much as I was.  

I looked at the sea-saw and saw the girl I was riding it with on the other side of it. Her face was filled with horror and she was almost in tears. She noticed I was looking at her and she ran away into the wooded part of the park.

I was getting kinda dizzy by this time. Everything around me turned blury and the sky was spinning. Just then I heard  sirens and Grandma Dorine ran over saying they were comming.

I was so dizzy and could hardly see anything. I saw red and blue flashing lights in my eyes. But I couldn't stay awake. With everything spinning, I drifted slowly into sleep. 

 

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On June 14th 2007 oreoash Said :
oreoash what happens next!
On June 14th 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie AH! What happens next! write more!
On June 4th 2007 pixiee11 Said :
pixiee11 i like it it is realy good keep writing