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Tragedy in Baltimore- Part One

Tragedy Created on 6-3-07 Views(121) Story Rating G

"Grandma Dorine!" I yelled as I rad into her house. I knew she wasn't my real grandma but she acted like since I had no grandma. "I haven't seen you in almost a year. How old are you now Sarah?" I held up 4 fingers and said "Four!"

"My, my we are growing up fast aren't we honey." she said as she tickeld my tummy. I laughed and giggled and so did she. She was my favorite person ever.

A while later I asked if we could go to the park. My mom and Grandma Dorine both said yes and we drove over to the park which was a couple blocks away. 

As I stepped out of the car I immediately saw a sea-saw. I also saw a girl wandering around and I walked over to her. "Hi! You want to ride on the sea-saw with me?" I said with my big brown eyes opened wide. "Sure" she said.

We walked over to the sea-saw and I got on first because if she got on first I would have never been able to get on. We went up and down and up and down laughing the whole time.

After a while I got tired of it and wanted to get off. I said "Can we get off now?" but she was laughing so loud that she didn't hear me. SO when my side went down, I went to climb off but my sudden weight absence made the sea-saw go down on her side where all the weight was. As the sea-saw went up, my mouth hit the metal bad that you hold on to and there was a cling. A short silence. And then a scream of pain and horror from a little girls mouth, mine. 

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On May 31st 2008 Goodbyelovexx Said :
Goodbyelovexx O.O kmp
On June 14th 2007 sexyqtpie Said :
sexyqtpie OMG! OUCH! I AM GOIGN TO GO READ MORE! EXELLENT!:)
On June 3rd 2007 nodaywithoutu Said :
nodaywithoutu ok i'll get part two out soon ok
On June 3rd 2007 krystalcook Said :
krystalcook ooo!!! sounds interesting!! can u tell me wut happens next?
On June 3rd 2007 pixiee11 Said :
pixiee11 that is realy good i realy like that
On June 3rd 2007 nodaywithoutu Said :
nodaywithoutu And please tell me your thoughts about this because I've never really written a story before and i want to know if you like it. If i need to put more detail or anything just tell and then if u like it i will come out with Part 2 which is even more dramatic
On June 3rd 2007 nodaywithoutu Said :
nodaywithoutu This is a true story!