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The Walking Ghost [Chpt 3]

Fiction Created on 6-5-08 Views(41) Story Rating G

I flew back to the ambulance and slipped swiftly in. At the very moment I got back my body was pretty much dead. The paramedics were shocking my body and jabbing more needles in me to try and save me. I looked at my body and felt helpless. Then I wondered if the reason that I was dying was becuase I didn't have a soul in me. I remembered how I could take over the police officers body and decided to do it with my own.

I floated down to where my body was and dove into my  head.  immediately after I was in everything went black. I thought it was because my eyes were closed to I struggled to open them but they wouldn't open. I tried to get back out of my body but it wasn't working. Then, I started to see a little light. It was very dim but I could tell it was getting closer. For a second I felt relief thinking that my eyes were opening. But I didn't feel my body moving and realized what was happening. I was going to the light.

I didn't want to die yet and definitely not like this. If I had known that this would happen I never would have came back. I struggled to get out of my body. The light got so close that there were only few black spots left and I could faintly hear angelic strings playing. I knew I was 2 seconds from being ked up into heaven and never looking at earth again. I would have been glad about this but for some reason I wasn't.

I struggled harder and harder and it felt like someone had strapped my spirit down to a table. I thought "no,no,No,No,NO,NO,NO" I kept struggling when all of a sudden the restraints let up and I knew it was over. i was going to heaven never to see the earth again. 

 

(sorry this is so late and short I couldn't really think of anything to put but the next one will be better I promise)

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