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The Walking Ghost [Chpt 2]

Tragedy Created on 5-29-08 Views(61) Story Rating G

As my body started to shut down I started dreaming. I dreamed that I was in my house sitting at the dinning table, playing Scrabble with Matt and Peter.We were all laughing because Peter had just put down "poop" as his word. Then, we heard the doorbell. I got up to got get I looked through the peep hole to see who it was and didn't see anyone. I unlocked the door and opened it to see if anyone was out there. But, right when I opened the door, everything went black.

I opened my eyes quickly because I got scared but when I looked around I wasn't in my smashed up car anymore. I was in an ambulance looking down at someone from the ceiling. I looked closer and realized it was me! I was stripped of most of my clothing and I only had my bra and underwear on and a blanket half way around me. The two paramedics looked frantic as they tried to wake up my body. One was trying to shock my body back to life and the other was trying to care for my wound. I realized that the branch was still in me but it was cut short. 

Then I realized, I wasn't inside my body anymore. I was a spirit watching myself die there in the ambulance. Then I remembered the note I wrote to Peter and Matt. I looked around the ambulance and didn't see it. I wondered if I could fly back to my car and get it. I decided to take a chance and go.

My spirit body went brisk fully right through the ambulance. I started to fly back down the street when I realized that I flew high enough I would be able to see police lights and find where the accident was. I tilted my spirit body up and flew into the sky. When I felt I was high enough I angled my self and looked down. The world looked so my different from up here. I could see the road I was driving on and the curve that killed me. I looks down from that curve and saw the lights where the accident was.

I flew down to where the accident was and saw them starting to pull my car up on a tow truck platform. I quickly swooped inside. I looked around and finally found the note and went to go pick it up. I grabbed it and pulled but nothing happened. I tried again and again and realized that I couldn't touch anything. Discouraged I turned my spirit around and flew out. While I was flying I flew through a police officer and suddenly felt weighed down. I stopped and looked d down and realized I had taken over the police officer's body. Surprised I tried to jump up and down. I did. Then I quickly remembered the note and walked up to the tow truck man and told him to lower the car for a moment. I climbed in and grabbed the note.

It was tinted red because the blood and spread throughout the paper. I opened it carefully and read the words to myself, "I love you Peter and I love you Matt." while I was reading another man had walked up and asked, "He Joe what's that?" I looked at him not knowing what to say and finally thought of something, "Umm, It's a note I found in the car. It says something about a Pater and a Matt." The other police office replied, "Oh yeah there were two people taken to the hospital earlier named Mat and Peter and they had the same last name so it must be to them." I felt so relieved and gave the paper to the other cop and told him to take it to the hospital for Peter and Matt.

I walked over out of sight of the other cop and flew out of Joe's body. I knew that Peter and Matt would get the note and so I headed back to the ambulance to be with myself again. 

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On June 2nd 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmp
On June 1st 2008 nlis2kool Said :
nlis2kool OH that is so good......KMPP
On May 31st 2008 Goodbyelovexx Said :
Goodbyelovexx ohh kmp O.O
On May 29th 2008 gikmo9 Said :
gikmo9 ooh creepy! kmpp