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“Ok so what movie are we going to go see?” I asked as we where 10 minuets into the drive to Paul’s house.
“I’m thinking “Jumper” that sound good?” Zack said as he pulled into the nicely paved drive way.
“Yeah I guess.” I sighed. I actually really didn’t want to do anything today; I’d rather be at home, moping. I was good at that.
“Cheer up cheeko!” Louise laughed as she pocked me in the side.
“Owe! Louis you know that hurts!” I squealed.
“Gosh Jackie your such a baby!” Zack yelled as Paul suddenly pulled the car door open and jumped in beside me.
“Hey, hey everyone!” Paul cheered as he buckled up.
“Hey man what’s up?” Zack asked as he once again pulled out on to the street.
“Not a lot.” Paul replied, looking over at me.
“You’re quit today?” I pulled my head up from being leaned against the window and looked over at him with a dead look in my eyes.
“You okay?” He asked.
I nodded my head “Yes” slowly and leaned my head back against the cold window.
The truth was that I wasn’t okay. They thought that taking me out would make me feel better, but when in reality it only made me feel worse. Seeing Louise and Zack together, made my heart hurt and ache. And I just didn’t feel like getting back out there with my feelings. I just need time to find myself again.
So many thoughts where swirling around, and around my head at that moment for some reason. I just couldn’t stop thinking why Ronnie hadn’t come to visit me? But…maybe he did? And know one has told me! Maybe Ronnie still does care for me! SHUT UP JACKIE! You know that’s crazy! Ronnie is, like, a million miles away. And he’s probably found a new girl. I took along sigh and closed my eyes.
“JACKIE!! HHHHEEEEELLLLLLOOOOO?!!?!??” Zacks yelling made me snap out of my deep trance.
“Huh? What?” I most have looked like a complete idiot.
“We’re here! Now come on.” Zack said as he pulled me out of the car.
“Come on Jackie, please cheer up! I really hate seeing you like this.” Louise begged.
“Yeah I know. I’m sorry. My emotions are just running wild today.” I chuckled and thin went back to dragging my feet.
“You want anything, Hun?” Zack asked Louise and he lead her to the snack bar, leaving me and Paul on our own.
“You want anything?” Paul asked.
“Um, no, I’m good.” I smiled.
Paul looked at me for a minuet and tilted his head a bit.
“What?” I asked.
“Are you sure you okay? Cuz you don’t seem like it.” Paul was now standing in front of me, looking very deep into my eyes.
I sighed and broke our stare by looking down. “I’ll tell you what I told Louis. My emotions are just running wild lately.”
“Hm, okay.”
“Hey you guys coming?!” Louise yelled across the theater lobby.
“Yeah!” Paul yelled back, wile grabbing my hand and pulling me forward.
I looked down at our hands hooked together, I tried to pull it away but Paul had a tight grip on it.
“Hey you guys a couple now?” Zack chuckled as we started walking into the theater room #2.
Paul was about to speak when I butt in.
“No, we’re not.” I felt bad for saying it. But I didn’t feel like that for Paul, he was just a friend.
I looked over at him and saw the hurt in his eyes. He loosened his grip and I quickly pulled away.
“Sorry” I mouthed to him. He just looked down and shrugged it off.
Great! I feel heart broken and now I feel like a total jerk! I smacked my self in the forehead and made my way into the theater with the rest of the group.
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It most have been 30 minuets into the movie when I felt a sudden thirst to get something to drink.
I leaned over and whispered to Paul that was getting something to drink, and would be back in a minuet.
He just nodded his head and kept his gaze on the screen.
Man he most be more upset thin I thought. I thought to myself as I got up and rushed out of the big, dark room and headed straight for the lobby.
“Maybe I should do something for him?” I mumbled out loud.
Maybe a kiss would cheer him up? Ugh! Get real Jackie! We not in kindergarten!
I most have been in very deep thought, and wasn’t paying any attention, for the next thing I know was running straight into a hard wall like thing.
“Oh my gosh! I’m so sorry!” I practically yelled as I looked up to see that I ran into some guy, but I couldn’t see there face because there back was turned.
But as the person started to turn, I really wish I was paying attention in the first place.
“Jackie?” the sweet voice said.
My whole body froze and I could feel my breath start to deepen as I looked up into Criss’s face.
{Sorry its kinda long…….buts thing are about to get very intrusting!!! Lol I’ll try to get 24 out tonight. Thx for reading}
Next time: will there be a lot of drama between Jackie and Criss?
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| On February 20th 2008 bittyb1 Said : | |
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ah man! So good! |
| On February 20th 2008 makana96792 Said : | |
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wow wow wow wow wow, cant wait 4 the nex one, luv this one, kmp |
| On February 19th 2008 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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kmp plz |
| On February 19th 2008 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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kmp plz |
| On February 19th 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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hey we like'em long plz keep me posted |
| On February 19th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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ahhh!!! cant wait fer 24, no pressure XP lol |
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omigosh |
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omgsh!!! |
| On February 18th 2008 punkdancr Said : | |
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awesome...kmp! |
| On February 18th 2008 mergily18 Said : | |
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Yay first rate and comment! i love it! kmp please! |


