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Romance Created on 1-25-08 Views(205) Story Rating G

That night I had the hardiest time falling asleep, I mean who wouldn't? After waking up from a stupid coma and then seeing the love of your life with a nether girl. This is starting to get pretty ridiculous.

I can even imagine how many tears that have rolled down my cheeks these last 3 days.

All I could do was stare up at the ceiling and think if life was really worth living any more. Maybe I should just shoot my self rite now and be don with this.

But I knew that it wasn't my rite to take my life away, it wasn't my rite at all.

So I just closed my eyes and started to count from 100 to 1. I think I was at 76 when I fell into a deep sleep.

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"Jackie. Jackie, sweet heart" I woke up to the sweet voice of Sara.

"Yeah." I said, sleepily.

"Honey, your father and I have to go to work. Will you be fine here with Justin and Zack. Or would you like us to call in sick?" She asked.

"No, no I'll be fine. You go to work." I said, sitting up in bed.

"Are you sure?" she sounded concerned.

"Yeah, I'll be good."

"All rite then. Love you" And with that Sara got up and left the room.

It was a couple of minuets later when I heard the car starting up and driving out of the drive way.

I sighed and slowly got up and walked to the bathroom.

I started up the shower and stripped. As the water got hot I looked at my self in the marrow and desisted that today I would go to the store and bye some black hair dye and maybe some clothes with the money that Dad and Sara had left me. If I wanted to start my life like it was I wanted to look the way I liked.

After my shower I picked out some skinny jeans and a loose band-T. They didn't really fit well, but it was all I got at the moment.

"Hey Justin." I called out as I entered the leaving room.

"Yeah." He said, walking in to meet me.

"I'm going to Mid-town for a little wile." I said, gathering my bag and money.

"Are you sure." Justin asked.

I rolled my eyes "Do you know how tiered I am of people asking me if I'm okay or if I’m sure!" I yelled.

"Jackie, I'm sorry. Its just I really care about you and I don't want any thing to happen to you." Justin said, looking down.

I staid quit for a minuet

"Oh, Justin I'm sorry. I'm just frustrated, that's all." I said, pulling him into a hug.

"It’s ok. Do you want me to come with?" He asked.

"That would be nice." I smiled. Probably the first time I had smiled since's I woke up.

"But where’s Zack?"

"He's still asleep. I'll leave a note." Justin said, writing some thing down on a little peace of yellow paper.

And with that we left the house.

"So...how long has Criss been dating that girl?" I asked as we where 10 minuets into the drive.

Justin Sighed before he said anything. "I don't know if we should talk about that." he said, not meeting eye contact.

"Justin please, I want to know." I slightly pleaded.

"Jackie..." Justin trailed off.

"Please Justin! I need to know!" I was now full out pleading.

There was a long silence, maybe 5 or 10 minuets to be exact.

"After Criss heard you where in a coma." he paused.

"Go on." I pushed.

"Jackie, He was heart broken. He spent ever waking minuet by your bed side. He wouldn't eat. He wouldn't sleep. He wouldn't even talk to any one." Justin explained.

I didn't say any thing, but gave him the hint to go on.

"It most have been 5 months when Criss met Maggie."

"Maggie?" I interrupted.

"The girl you saw yesterday."

"Oh."

"Do you want me to go on?" Justin asked.

"Yeah."

"Well when he met Maggie he started eating and sleeping again. He started acting like a normal person again. But you could tell he was still broken inside because every time some one would bring you up, all the color in his face would go away, and he would get really depressed." Justin stopped talking as he pulled into the parking lot of Target.

"Jackie I still think he has feelings for you. But I don't know." Justin said, unbuckling his seat belt.

"I'll only be a few minuets." I changed the subject. I didn't want to hear any more of it.

Justin looked confused with the sudden change of subject. "Wait? You don’t want me to come in?" He said, trying to stay on what I was talking about.

"I just need some time by my self." I said, exiting the car with out a nether word and mad my way into Target.

I went straight to the hair section, thinking about what Justin had said. "I still think he has feelings for you." I whispered out loud.

I know I still have feeling for him, but I really don’t want to. "Ugh!" I groaned out loud, making out a couple of heads turn.

I grabbed the blackest of black I could find and 3 sticks of black eyeliner. I guess I should get a few shirts wile I’m at it. I thought to my self as I walked to the Juniors

I found a pair of skinny jeans and 3 shirts. One was plain black with a big red heart with a knife stabbed through it.

As I walked up to the casher I put all my things down and waited for the total to come out. But before I could pay the casher said. "Wait a second? You’re Jackie."

I looked up and met the eyes of a blue eyed, blond haired teenaged girl.

"I'm Maggie." she said.

My eyes widened and I could feel tears coming on.

"I'm Criss's girlfriend. We didn’t get to meet yesterday." She sounded like she was talking to a 3 year old.

"Yeah. I saw you." I said in a cold, heartless voice.

"Yeah, well I would really like it if you didn’t hug him like you did yesterday. If you don’t mind." She was really starting to sound cocky.

"What?" I was getting pissed.

"Well you know...it’s just I don’t like it when ether girls touch him like you did." she said in an "I’m so cute" tone of voice.

"Oh really...and what are you going to do if I don’t stop. Call daddy and take all of my money." Oh my gosh! Did I just say that?

Maggie’s eyes got wide with anger.

"No I just don’t want you to get hurt. Jackie...I’m afraid to tell you this but...Criss dosint like you any more, and he never will."

And with that I throw the money at her and walked off yelling "Go screw you self!"

"Oh! It’s ok! Criss helps me with that!" She yelled back.

I stopped dead in my tracks and looked down, debating withers or not I should go rip her eyes out or not. But I desisted not to and just walked out of the store with hot tears rolling down my face.

{Ok I know its going really really fast! but I had to get some things over with before I could get into the good part of the story!! muhahaha!! I have such good ideas ahead! lol so yeah! thx for reading and keep a eye out for chapter 20!!}

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On January 26th 2008 mergily18 Said :
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On January 25th 2008 weanie2 Said :
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On January 25th 2008 jessimerri369 Said :
jessimerri369 wtf is maggie such a bitch and y does he like her omfg she jackie needs to turn the fuck around and hit the bitch man anyways love it kmp plz and hurry plzzz!!!!!!!!!
On January 25th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said :
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On January 25th 2008 makana96792 Said :
makana96792 Wow, Maggie is a complete bitch, reminds me of a gurl i know. I would of hit her, lol, love this story, Keep me posted please
On January 25th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 haha! I would run over and hit her! haha
On January 25th 2008 Carey2010 Said :
Carey2010 whoa... i wuolda turned around and slapped her lol. Keep me posted haha its cute : )
On January 25th 2008 punkdancr Said :
punkdancr wow what a total bitch! i would have to prove her wrong...big time!! kmp!
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On January 25th 2008 heathsgurl94 Said :
heathsgurl94 ahh!!! oh my god maggie is such a bitch!