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unwanted love. part 18

Romance Created on 1-11-08 Views(204) Story Rating G

TWO DAYS LATER.

Two days had passed cense I woke up and today, Friday, I well be going home to face my new life. But my mind wasn’t set on going home, no; it was set on why Criss hadn’t come to visit me wile I was in the hospital? You would think that he would be the first one there to greet me as I woke up and be the first one there on the day I would be going home. I mean even Louise came to visit. The day I woke up and when I got to see Justin one of the things I asked was if Criss was here? But he didn’t answer me. In fact, nether did Zack answer?

I was starting to go into real deep thought when the Car door opened and shut.

My dad looked behind him and said. "You ready?"

I looked out the window into a blank stare and said. "Yeah."

The ride home was quit and awkward. Sara would every once in a wile look back at me and say. "You’re going to be ok." But that was it.

Only I knew it wasn’t going to be ok.

As we pulled up to the house I was relived to see that it hadn’t changed at all. But has I started to exit the car, flash backs of the day I was hit started to flood my head.

I quickly shuck my head like a wet dog and took Sara’s hand as she led me up to the house.

My dad slowly opened the door and I took 5 big steps into the house.

"It hasn’t changed." I said, looking around like a little kid.

But before they could answer Justin walked in.

I looked at him with such a pale face that I probably looked more like a dead person walking then his sister.

Justin walked over to me and pulled me into a big bear huge and whispered "I’m glad your home."

A small tear rolled down the side of my face. "Me to." Even though it felt like I was just here a couple of days ago.

"Were, is Zack?" I asked, pulling my self away from the huge.

"I’m right here." I looked behind Justin and saw Zack standing in the corner.

He quickly walked over to me and gave me the same kind of hug that I had just gotten from Justin.

I pulled away and wiped my eyes that where starting to water. I smiled a bit as I did this and shot my gaze up so I was looking at every one.

"It would be a lot easer for me if we didn’t get to emotion and if we could just start my life like how it was." I flashed them all a smile, trying my best not to show my frustration.

There was a long silence.

"Any thing that will make you feel comfortable." My dad finally said.

I gave him a hug and then said. "Is my room still up stairs?"

"Of course sweet heart." Sara smiled.

"Come on." Justin said, taking my hand and pulling me up stairs and into my room.

A sad smile spread across my face as I was relived to see that it was all the same. My bed was in the same place as when I left, the picture cloud was still on my wall and closet was still full of clothes.

For a wile I was unable to move my feet and all I was able to do was stare.

Justin most have thought it was funny cuz the next thing I knew was him lifting me up and throwing me down on my clean bad.

"AW! What was that for?!" I practically screamed.

He started laughing uncontrollably.

"WHAT!" I yelled.

"Ha...HA! It’s just that I haven’t got to do that in forever!" he the laughing.

The smile that was on my face soon turned up side down.

"Oh Jackie, I’m sorry, what did I say?" Justin asked, pulling me into him.

That’s when I broke down in to millions of unstoppable tears.

"Every one keeps talking about how they haven’t seen me smile or heard my laugh or have gotten to hug me in forever!" I walled. "But to me it’s like I just saw them yesterday!!"

Justin was now crying as he stroked my hair. "Its okay, its okay Jackie, I promise every thing is going to be fine."

We both just sate there and held each other in till I finally fell asleep in his arms.

 

Ding….Dong…..

"Ug" I groaned and turned on my side.

I was deeply snuggled under my warm covers and had no intentions on getting up.

Ding….Dong……

I then remembered dad and Sara telling me before I fell asleep that they had to go to work or they would loose there jobs.

So I slowly and unwillingly cruelled out of bed and slumped down stairs. Before opening the door I took a quick look at my self in the marrow that hung by the door. I hadn’t even noticed that my once black hair was now grown out and it was now its natural color of brown. I was in my pajama pants and a tank top with no make up on, so I didn’t really look all that good.

But I didn’t care; it wasn’t like it was going to be any one to impress. It’s probably just a solicitor.

I sighed and stretched out my sleepy back and opened the door. But oh I wish I hadn’t.

All I could do was stand there and look into the deep blue eyes of Criss. Wow he still looks good, maybe even better. A billon thoughts where running through my mind at once.

I finally slapped out of my trances and slung my self into his arms.

I hugged him tightly and tears began to fall again.

He slowly rapped his arms around me and said. "I missed you Jackie."

I started to sob even more and clung to him for dear life.

"Criss." I said into his chest.

But then memory of him not being there for me popped into my head. I brought my face to meet his and said with a little anger.

"Why wrent you there?"

"What?" Criss said, like he didn’t know what I was talking about.

"Why wrent you there when I woke up?"

"Come on Criss! We’re going to miss the movie!!" I heard a female voice yell.

I gave Criss a weird look and looked over his shoulder to see a blued eye blond haired girl leaning out of his truck window.

"I’m coming Baby!" Criss yelled with a bit of sadness.

I quickly pushed away from him and looked at him like he just stabbed me in the heart.

But the thing was. He really did.

I started to walk backward into the house.

"Jackie, please let me explain." Criss started to plead wile walking towards me.

"No." I whispered. "There’s nothing to explain."

"Jackie please!" Criss was now starting to tear up.

But before he could fully get into the house I quickly shut the door on him.

I turned around and covered my face with my hands and slid my back down the door.

Just when I thought my life was going to be okay, it just got worse.

{Ok so I know this one wasn’t real detailed but I had to get the meeting with Criss over with. Now as you can tell there’s going to be a lot of drama happing and I have a great plane on were this story is going!! So hope you liked! Plz comment and rate!}

In Next Chapter: See what happens when Jackie and Criss’s girlfriend meet up.

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Khmerfriendz aye..
On January 20th 2008 damita3 Said :
damita3 cant wait to see that...kmp!!
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emoprincessXD ok love it so much like the other keep me posted
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Carey2010 oooohh lol keep me posted!! first comment yeah!!! haha ♥
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