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unwanted love. part 16

Romance Created on 1-7-08 Views(165) Story Rating G

 

There was a long and cold silence that lasted for what seemed like hours.

"What?" I said in a very ton less voice.

"I'm sorry Jackie." Was all the doctor said.

"but how is that possible?" I was trying so hard to find a lie in the doctors eyes.

He took a deep breath before he began. "When the truck hit you all it did was nock you down." He paused and took anther deep breath. "but when you fell you hit your head very hard. So hard that you fell unconscious. Which when you got to the hospital we found that your blood was beginning to clot in your brain."

He stopped.

"Go on." I whispered.

So he did. "We went in and fixed it but after the sugary you didn't wake up. You had a bad reaction to the medication we gave you, which put you in a coma."

When he finished I gasped for breath and started breathing hard.

"But. That. Cant. Be. True!" I said in between gasps.

"Jackie I'm going to need you to calm down." the second doctor said as he injected some kind of fluid into my I-v.

I wanted so hard to not belive any of what they where saying but something was telling me that it was all true.

"Wheres my Dad. I need to see him!" I sobbed.

"We all ready called your family and there on there way." The first doctor said as he rubbed my hand.

"Jackie I know this is going to be the hardiest thing ever, but I promise you that you well be okay."

I didn't answer him. I just covered my face with my cold hands and sobbed.

{I know its like crazy short and not very good but I wasn't feeling very good. But I'll try to get more out tomorrow. Trust me I have some very good ideas of were this story is going to go!! Comment/rate plz :) }

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On January 9th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha good keep me posted
On January 9th 2008 Carey2010 Said :
Carey2010 aww does the guy still like her?? Keep me posted!!
On January 8th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said :
ALICHELLA16 OH LALA! lol it seems liek all the stories got comas right now lmao my story had a coma lmfao glad im not left out lol very good by the way keep me posted?
On January 8th 2008 RavenNitrous Said :
RavenNitrous its good kmp
On January 8th 2008 Sk8ncutie001 Said :
Sk8ncutie001 OMG!!! PLZ KMP!!!
On January 8th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 it was good!!!
On January 8th 2008 punkdancr Said :
punkdancr oh i like the twist! please say criss is still around!? keep me posted!
On January 8th 2008 makana96792 Said :
makana96792 its good, kmp
On January 8th 2008 babydoll6789 Said :
babydoll6789 keep me posted!
On January 7th 2008 jessimerri369 Said :
jessimerri369 ahhhhh i still cant believe she was in a coma for that long anyways love it kmp plz and thankx
On January 7th 2008 heathsgurl94 Said :
heathsgurl94 ahh it needs to be longer. but its good. does that one kiddd still like her or did he move onnn?