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I heard a slow beeping ...beep...beep...beep... I slowly opened my eyes and was surprised that I didn't hurt all that bad. But it did feel like I hadn't walked in years. I groaned and rubbed my eyes with my hands. I noticed that I was in a hospital. But I was alone. Were is every one? I thought as I looked around the room. I just got hit by a car, so why I'm I alone? After a moment or two I heard the door open and saw a lady in a scooby doo scrub walk in with towels in her hand. She hadn't even looked up. "Um, Ma'am." I said. I was little surprised because my voice was a little croaky. She quickly looked up and dropped the towels she was caring and ran out of the room. "What the Fu..." but before I could finish she came back in, only this time she had 2 doctors with her. One of the doctors walked very quickly to me and said. "Miss. Jackie." He said in a very calm voice. "Do you know who and were you are?" I looked at him like he was stupid and said. "Well du I know who I am." He looked back at the ether doctor and then back at me. "Miss Jackie, do you remember any thing that happened?" he asked. Is this guy for real! Of course I remember what happened! "Miss Jackie." He said again. "Yeah I know what happened." I said as if I was trying to tell him that he was one of the most stupid doctors ever. "Will you please tell me what happened." He said pulling up a seat. "Um...I was hit by a car." I said in a deep voice. "very good, now could you please te--" I cut in before he could continue. "Doctor! I know who I am, where I am, and how I got here! Okay! I was hit by a truck and now I'm sitting in the hospital bed. How long have I been here any ways? A day?" I was getting aggravated. He looked at me with pitiful eyes and sighed. "doctor well you please tell me how long I've been here! And why isn't my family here? Why is Criss not here?" I was all most shouting now. But before I could continue my rage something on the wall cot my eye. It was a calendar that was set on the month of September. What a second! Last time I checked it was only June! But then a nether thing cot my gaze. The calendar said September, 5, 2008. I shot my look to the doctor who was now looking down at his hands. "what's going on." I whispered. The doctor took a deep breath and sighed. "DOCTOR!" I yelled He looked up at me and said very slowly "Jackie. You've been in a coma for all most a year and a half. |
{sorry again its so short! more coming in 2008!!}
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| On January 5th 2008 69Kimmy69 Said : | |
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Keep me posted this is really good!! |
| On December 30th 2007 bittyb1 Said : | |
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OH GOSH!!!!! I have to wait til 2008?!?! aww man!!! |
| On December 30th 2007 damita3 Said : | |
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OOHHHHH GOOOOOODDDD!!!! poooooor Jackieee!!! keep me posted!! |
| On December 30th 2007 emoprincessXD Said : | |
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post more i love it so far hey what did happen to criss |
| On December 30th 2007 babydoll6789 Said : | |
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omg...keep me posted i love it! |
| On December 29th 2007 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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kmp. |
| On December 29th 2007 emogirl557 Said : | |
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omg
will she still be with criss |
| On December 29th 2007 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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HOLY SHIT KEEP ME POSTED PLZ and write more soon ahhhhhh |
| On December 29th 2007 makana96792 Said : | |
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Omg, That's like so sad, but write some more this i really good, keep me posted |
| On December 29th 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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man, that really sucks, keep me posted please XD |
| On December 29th 2007 Equasha Said : | |
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wow really good and this time can u plz keep me posted |
| On December 29th 2007 Sk8ncutie001 Said : | |
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OH NO!!!!!!!='( poor Jackie! |
| On December 29th 2007 heathsgurl94 Said : | |
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oh my god!!!!!!!! write more more more!!!!!!! |


