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UNWANTED LOVE. 13!!

Romance Created on 12-21-07 Views(249) Story Rating G

I couldn’t get my feet to move, it was like they were nailed to the floor. I just watched as the funnel started to form in the dark sky.

 

Flash backs started coming into my head, from win this exact thing happened two years ago.

 FLASH BACK. “Jackie! Come on, in here!” Hanna yelled to me. We where at the mall win the tornado hit us. The mall was now packed with screaming people and it seemed as if it would never get quit.  “Come on Jackie!” Hanna yelled again, grabbing my arm and pulling me along.  She pulled me into some kind of department store; I think it was Dillard’s. I ran behind Hanna; following her every move. But it was hard for me to keep up because I was never good at running and Hanna was the star runner for our track team. “Hey! Watch it!” I yelled as some lady ran rite into me, knocking me down. I looked up from the ground and saw no trace of Hanna any were.“Shit.” I mumbled. I wasn’t worried about my self; in fact I don’t even remember me being scared. But I knew that if Hanna lost me she would surly start to freak. “Hey, are you ok?” I heard a voice above me. I looked up and saw a boy; maybe three years older then my self. “Um, no, not really. I just lost my friend and I’m stuck in this suck fest.” I groaned. “Well I asked because you’re bleeding.” The boy said, taking my hand and pulling me up. “What?” I said. I then felt a trial of blood rolling down my forehead. I wiped some of it way with my hand and then looked at my now bloody fingers. “Crap. This all ways happens to me.” I whispered to my self. “Come on, I have in idea.” He said, grabbing my hand and pulling me with him. I didn’t resist, for some reason I was happy to go with him. “Oh, WAIT!” I screamed. We stopped and he looked at me in a funny way. “HANNA!! OVER HERE!” I yelled as loud as I could. “We have no time to wait for her!” He said. “Fine!” I started running with him again. He led me to a back room of the store, and pushed me in. “What are we doing?” I asked, a little frantic. “Trust me!” “How can I trust you win I don’t even know your name?” I exclaimed. He then stopped me and said “I’m Ronnie Breton.”  “I’m Jackie Paterson.” I said, shaking his hand. “Beautiful name.” he smiled at me. I could start to feel my face blush. 

“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!!” I heard yelling and I came back to the present.

 

I looked over and saw Criss standing next to me.

 

“COME ON! WE NEED TO GO!” the wind was drowning out his yelling voice.

 

I started for the door but Criss held me back.

 

“WE DON’T HAVE TIME TO CROSS THE STREET!” I started pulling me to a nearby closet.

 

I was still holding on to the small puppy as he pushed me into the closet.

I was surprised that he hadn’t barked once through this whole ordeal.

 

“Stay close me.” Criss whispered in my ear, as he leaned me up against back wall of closet wile covering me up with his body.

 

A small tear rolled down my pail face as I buried it in his chest.

 

I was expecting to feel a lot of roughness but all I heard was the strong wind.

 

I would of guessed that 10mineuts had pasted win suddenly every thing was quit.

 

I lifted my heard off of Criss and he slowly backed a way from me.

 

“Stay here.” He said as he creaked the door open.

 

I just nodded and watched him leave me. I looked down at the puppy and stroked his soft head.

  

“Jackie.” Criss said in a soft voice. “Its over.”

 

I took his hand and walked with him. Win we got out side I was surprised to see that only  some trees and a crap lot of trash was spread across the streets of our neighbor hood.

 

The tornado must have turned the ether way. I thought, as Criss and I mad our way to my house that now had a trash can on the roof.

 

“Criss.” I said, stopping in my tracks. “Yeah.” He answers, turning to face me.

 

“Thank you.” I said in a much quit voice. And with that I got up on my tip toes and pressed my lips lightly against his.

 

We broke away from the kiss and stared into each others eyes.

 

He then took me under his arm and led me away into the house.

  

{OK so um I was thinking that this mite bee the end of this story, cuz I’m getting a little bored with it? But I don’t know yet, what do you guys think? I have a nether love story that working on, and I mite start posting it, but that’s only if this is the end of this one. So tell me what you think, and if you want me to continue unwanted love.}

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On December 21st 2007 jessimerri369 Said :
jessimerri369 CONTINUE THAT CANT BE THE END and i love it if u do keep going keep me posted plz and thankx
On December 21st 2007 Carey2010 Said :
Carey2010 um.... no dont stop please!!
On December 21st 2007 Equasha Said :
Equasha plz continue and dis waz really good let me know wat u decide
On December 21st 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said :
ALICHELLA16 how can you end it there? you cant give us a juicy flash back and then end the story, i want to know what that kid did from teh mall!!!! keep meh posted love it
On December 21st 2007 MamieLynn67 Said :
MamieLynn67 plz continue
On December 21st 2007 heathsgurl94 Said :
heathsgurl94 like it.
On December 21st 2007 hglnj94 Said :
hglnj94 omg please write more!
On December 21st 2007 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 NOO!! You should write more!!
On December 21st 2007 foxridergirl09 Said :
foxridergirl09 noooooooooooooo plz dont end it
On December 21st 2007 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 I want you to keep it going. I really like it! keep me posted what ever you do..
On December 21st 2007 emoprincessXD Said :
emoprincessXD no keep going pls i love it keep me posted if you write more
On December 21st 2007 damita3 Said :
damita3 well....i want it to continue..............what ever u do...keep me psosted!!!
On December 21st 2007 Sk8ncutie001 Said :
Sk8ncutie001 This would be a good endin spot but its also a brand new start. But its whatever i LOVEd this chapter! =)
On December 21st 2007 emogirl557 Said :
emogirl557 i want it to continue