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UNWANTED LOVE. *11*
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I came back down stairs with my long black pajama pants on with a grey tank top that barely brushed the top of my pants, so a little bit of skin was showing.
And just as I hit the bottom step the door flue open with a big boom! I practically fell down from the shock.
“Don’t worry guys!! The party is now hear!”
I looked up and saw Louise standing in the door way with her blood red sweat pants and a black shirt that said “All around me” on.
“Jackie? What the hell are you doing on the floor?” Louise said, as she closed the door behind her.
“DON’T EVER COME IN LIKE THAT!! YOU SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME!”
I yelled as I got up.
I looked over at Criss that was now laughing at the whole situation.
Louise started laugh with him and helped me to the couch.
“Criss! Shut up!” I wined.
“Oh come on Jackie, we’re just haven’t some fun with you.” He said tossing me a blanket that was behind the couch.
“Whatever.” I rolled my eyes and cuddled up in the blanket.
“Hey Louse, hit the lights please.”
“Okay-Dokey!” Louise sang as she skipped over to the lights and flipped them off and then pulled the drapes closed.
It surprisingly got really dark. I’m not talking a bout the kind of dark that you can still see a little bit in front of your self, no what I mean is that I cant even see in front of my face.
“Guys I can’t see?” Louise called out.
Criss and I both laughed and started saying.
“Fallow my voice.”
“Umph. Ouch! Louise! That’s me you’re sitting on!” I said as I pushed Louise off of me.
“Oops, sorry Jackie.” She said as she got off of me and then snuggled under the blanket with me.
“Can you girls be quit so we can start the movie?” Criss said in annoyed voice.
“You such a party pooper!” Louise yelled. “I know what well get you too loosen up!”
I then heard a loud “NO! HAHA! LOUSE! HAHA! STOP!”
“Come on Jackie help me!” Louise told me as she kept tickling Criss.
“I think I’m going to stay out of this one.” I said turning my attention to the movie that was still on main menu.
“Who’s the party pooper now?!” they both yelled at me.
And the next thing I new was Criss and Louise where both on top of me tickling me with no slack.
“AAA!! STOP!! THAT TICKELS!!” I yelled as loud as I could.
“That’s why they call it tickling stupid!” Louise laughed.
We then heard the door open and the lights turn on.
We all squinted from the sudden change from dark to bright.
I looked over the arm rest of the couch and saw Justin standing in the living room with the most confused looks on there faces.
I then realized that win the light turned on, Louise got off of me but Criss was still on top of me. He then all so realized it, and quickly got off of me.
“Thank God you came! Criss and Louise we practically killing me!” I shouted for joy.
“I see that.” Justin said and then awkwardly walked over to us and sat down.
“Dad and Sara just call me. They said that there’s been some kind of freak storm 5 hours a way from us and it’s injured a shit loud of people and killed some. So there not going to be coming home tonight, there going to be too busy at the hospital.”
Justin said.
“They said that we need to stay in doors for the rest of the evening. Its getting pretty nasty out there, they think that the storm mite hit us.
As he said this Criss, Louise and I got up and looked out the window and sure enough the sky was as dark as the deepest part of the ocean, I could tell the wind was picking up and we could hear thunder rolling in.
“Louise, you’re staying here tonight, I don’t want you walking home in this.” I said in a worried, stern voice.
“You don’t have to tell me twice.” She said, looking at me, noticing the worry in my eyes. “Jackie, are you okay?”
I was studying the sky, my eyes where fixed to it. Some thing a bout this was familiar.
“Jackie!” Justin shouted.
I snapped out of my trance and looked at him.
“Are you ok?”
“Yeah, I’m fine.”
“Criss, why don’t you stay here too, it’s not a good idea driving in this.” Justin said as he got up from the couch and stood at the window with us.
“Wait, what a bout Zack?” I asked turning too Justin.
“I called him and told him he’s needs to stay at Paul’s house tonight.”
Justin said, looking at me.
“Well we where a bout to watch a move, so we could do that in the mean time.”
Criss said as he sate back on the couch.
“Sounds good to me.”
Justin and Louise both said and sate down.
But I was still at the window, for some reason I wasn’t able to get my self a way from it.
There was some thing a bout this weather that was so familiar, that it was all most scary.
“Jackie are you going to watch with us?” I heard Louise call out to me.
“Um, yeah.” I said, slowly walking over to the couch and sitting next to Criss.
Through out the movie I found it hard to focus, no madder how hard I tried, my mind was all was some were ells.
And before I knew it the movie was over.
I we all just sat there in the dark. Nun of us talked or moved.
“Jackie, can I talk to you for a minuet?” I looked up and say Criss standing in front of me, holding his hand out.
I looked over at Justin and Louise and saw that they both had fallen asleep.
So I took Criss’s hand and he pulled me up from the couch and led me to the kitchen.
“So, what did you want to talk a bout?” I asked as we both sat on the high bar stools.
He took a deep breath in and then let it out with a sigh.
“Jackie.” He said in what seemed as a nervous tone of voice. “I don’t know how to put this, or how to say this.”
“Criss, you can tell me any thing, just say it.” I was trying to look into his eyes but he kept his face down.
There was a long pause that felt like it went on forever
He then looked up at me with a very straight look on his face.
“Jackie, there’s only one thing I want to tell you and I’m just going to say it out straight.”
He looked deeper then any one as ever looks in to my eyes.
“Jackie Paterson, I’m madly in-------TO BE continued {HAHAHA!!!! *evil laugh* I hope u liked this one! I all ready have chapter 12 written out, I just need to type it all up. But I really think u all r going to luv the next chapter!! Comment/rate plz J!!}Comments
| On December 19th 2007 damita3 Said : | |
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why would u do something like that!!! u should post the next chapter right away!!!lol............... keep me posted!!!!! |
| On December 18th 2007 emogirl557 Said : | |
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liked i loved it can you keep me posted plz |
| On December 18th 2007 DaKay Said : | |
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CLIFF HANGERS THEY MUST DIE NOW!!
haha.. keep me updated :p |
| On December 18th 2007 Equasha Said : | |
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i hate u :( why did u do that y must u tease me hahahaha keep me posted |
| On December 18th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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NoooooooO!!!! Whywhywhy? Zomgg! Pleasee keep me posted:D!! |
| On December 18th 2007 MamieLynn67 Said : | |
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omg why would u do that to us wwwwhhhhyyyyy. Cant wait till the next one. |
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WHY!!! why would you put a cliff hanger on us!!!!! |
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you are an evil person you know that lol keep me posted i love it |
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omg i like it i just read all 11 chapters right now in class lmao its good keep me posted plz |
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OMG!!! So freakin good! please keep me posted!!!! |
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oh god.. he madly in love with herrr!!!!! lol.. keep me posted!! |
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AWWWWWWW I LOVE IT!!! KEEP ME POSTED!!
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