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you cant take me! (intro)

you cant take me! (intro)

NonFiction Created on 1-20-08 Views(43) Story Rating G

As I was walking down the brown dirty streets of africa, I see a mother her child and the husband. But for some very odd reason they where standing up against the wall worried scared! I started wondering so I went up the girl looked around my age she was about 14 or 13. She sturned and looked at me and said leave! of coarse I didn't do what I was told i went behind the complex. the first time I here them wispering how?why?what?... then, BAM BOOM then I hear yelling and running away. after a while i come out....

tell me if you like it and ill continue...

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On January 21st 2008 nicolasmazure Said :
nicolasmazure go to my page read prt 1 im finished!
On January 20th 2008 stephni89 Said :
stephni89 What happend next!!!!! lol
On January 20th 2008 psche Said :
psche hm keep going this is a great start. makes the reader wonder what you'll do next:]