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Creative Created on 2-18-08 Views(201) Story Rating G

Jason sat in his apartment, alone. He felt cold and dead inside. Monica's sweet voice no longer rang through the house. The house was dark and melancholy. Lights only cast a greater shadow, and it made them seem more ominous. Jason looked at his wrists. The scars he had from so many years ago were still there. And from so many years ago, they still hurt. His heart felt like it was being torn apart. He walked over to his stereo, picked up a copy of his latest CD: "Within This Dying World". He took it and walked into his bathroom. He walked inside and took his clothes off. He put the CD in the stereo in his bathroom. He filled the tub, and sat inside. The CD player was put on repeat of the ballad of the CD; the song he had written for Monica. 

The next morning, Scott came over to Jason's house. He knocked on the door. It was unlocked and it swung wide open, "Jason?" he called out, "You here?" He walked through the apartment. He saw that the bathroom door was slightly open. He walked over, pushed it open and gasped. Jason sat in the tub, in a pool of his own blood. He looked over at the CD player, it was playing the song Jason had written for Monica. Beside Jason's body was a note. Scott walked over. He noticed Jason had a long scar across his neck, and the bloody razor was in his hand which hung outside the tub. He opened the note and read:

"Dear whoever found this note,

I see no point in living anymore. The love of my life and my unborn child have both been taken from me. I am off to join them in the kingdom of Heaven. My wife, Monica, was killed yesterday at the docks. It should be around the news later. The profits from my band's last CD goes to all my band members, they can divide it amongst themselves. All the belongings in my house I would like sent to charity. Any money I have in my bank account shall be donated to charity as well. With good regards, see you on the other side.

-Jason Creed"

Tears trickled down Scott's eyes. "Scott? Jason? Monica? Anybody in here?" Jennie's voice came out. She walked into the bathroom and yelped. Scott didn't take his eyes off his dead friend. He handed the note to Jennie and walked over to Jason. He knelt beside Jason, "I'll miss you, buddy," Scott whispered. With a sad sigh, Scott got up, called for an ambulance, and put his arm around Jennie. Jennie shook and wept uncontrollably. Scott comforted her, "Shhhh, it's all right," he whispered, "They're in a better place now."

 

THE END

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On March 22nd 2008 inurDREAMSx14 Said :
inurDREAMSx14 this story was amazing! your the best write ever! keep me posted for sure! omg I LOVE YOUR WRITING!
On March 8th 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said :
omfgusuck12345 wow..i totally didnt read ANY of the stories be4 this, but thiss is deepp.and without even reading the other ones it makes me wanna cry! hah. well..ur a great writer!
On February 23rd 2008 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss aw.
On February 21st 2008 missin0you0ada Said :
missin0you0ada whoa that was totally unexpected i wanna cry:[ wow that was deep man:[
On February 19th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 This was so sad at least they are together and now they can never be taken away from eachother. This was a really great story Nick. Let me know when you get another story up.
On February 19th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 awwwwwzzzzz good end but sad made me cry wahhhhhh
On February 19th 2008 Frizzy01 Said :
Frizzy01 Great job. your story was really good. [: A sad ending but its life, stuff happens. I actually started crying by the last chapter. This is the best story I've read so far and with a sad but really good ending. Please comment me on any new stories you make. [:
On February 18th 2008 username685 Said :
username685 did you have to end it like that it fits greatly with the story but its so omg i cant wait til your next series wow
On February 18th 2008 pellagirl933 Said :
pellagirl933 wow...this was an awesome series! i loved it! please keep me posted on anything else that you write!
On February 18th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 oh wow sad but awesome i cried
On February 18th 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae that was a sad ending. im almost crying. keep me posted on future stories
On February 18th 2008 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend ahh!!! this was a great ending!!!!
On February 18th 2008 DaKay Said :
DaKay awwwwwwwwwwwwww ... it was great.. but awwwww
On February 18th 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 OMGGGGGG thats so freaking sad..it mademe sad...
On February 18th 2008 feld88200 Said :
feld88200 man now i really am crying....... this was such a great story
On February 18th 2008 punkdancr Said :
punkdancr i would have done that too if my wife and unborn child were killed in front of me...only seems right! wonderful story...although tragic!
On February 18th 2008 Melanie82092 Said :
Melanie82092 NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! OMG THIS SUCKS GRRRRRRR i didnt want it to end like this awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this sucks lol but omg this story was so so so so so so so so so so good lol KMP on your next stories *CRY CRY*
On February 18th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha i'm cryin now omgosh that was so sad butso awesome great story i loved it
On February 18th 2008 gahmmmblah Said :
gahmmmblah oh wow. it was great.
On February 18th 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 omg at least they will all be together once more...i cant believe that happened tho gosh it was a really great story i loved it...keep me posted on anything else u decide to write much love
On February 18th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 Oh My God. Wow. Bravo. This is literally one of the best chapters I have heard. I love the way you write and I always will. Congrats on a great story. Keep Me Posted on Future stories.