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Accidental Love [Chapter 33]

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Chapter 33

 

                                Sophie’s eyes filled with tears that were on the verge of falling.

 

How could he have known? She thought.

 

Sophie froze when she knew who told him. Her mother.

 

She quickly blinked back her tears as anger possessed her body.

 

She stomped down her stairs making her fury known to all. She went into her kitchen with fists at her sides.

 

“Mom!” She said quietly, trying to contain any profanity.

 

“Yes, dear?” Her mother asked. She looked oblivious to having done anything.

 

“Why. Did. You. Tell. Logan?” Sophie asked, seething.

 

Sophie’s mother opened her mouth and quickly closed it. “Well, he had a right to know didn’t he?”

 

“I know he had a right to know! I was going to break it to him gently before you decided to solve my problems for me,” Sophie yelled, forgetting to keep her cool. She felt a wave of guilt rush over her as she remembered she was never planning to tell him. She ignored it and focused on her anger.

 

Sophie’s mother looked down at her apron. There was an awkward silence.

 

“Look,” Sophie said coolly, “Stay out of my business. Don’t try to do anything because you and Dad seem to screw everything up. Don’t help me at all because it always backfires. These are MY problems, let me deal with them. It’s bad enough you are making me move, and now I probably won’t even get to be friends with the one person that matters to me the most.”

 

Sophie turned on her heel, and walked back up to her room slamming the door shut. She collapsed on her bed as she realized what she had just said. She looked horrified that she had said that to her own mother. She instantly began to feel guilty because never had she been this angry with her mother.

 

I shouldn’t have said that, Sophie thought gloomily. She bit her lip as she gathered enough courage to go apologize.  

 

She opened her bedroom door again, and softly walked down the steps. She heard sobs coming from the kitchen. She walked towards it and saw her mother at the table with her head in her hands.

 

“Mom?” Sophie said softly as tears of her own began to cascade. Her mother hastily brushed her tears away as she looked up with red rimmed eyes.

 

“Yes?” She asked her voice breaking.

 

“I’m so sorry,” Sophie cried as she rushed to her mother’s side and hugged her.

 

“Shh...” Sophie’s mother said soothingly, “It’s okay,”

 

“I didn’t mean it, I swear. I just don’t know what I’m going to do. I mean, first Austin and now Logan? I’m losing everything,”

 

“I know, sweetheart,” Her mother told her gently, “I tried to convince your father from not moving you but he doesn’t want you to deal with this place anymore.”

 

Sophie’s sobs soon turned into hiccups. Her mother wiped away any leftover tears from her porcelain face.

 

“It was wrong of me to tell Logan, you’re right, you should’ve broken the news to him,” Her mother said truthfully, “I’ll stop invading your privacy. I just… just thought it’d be too much for you to tell him,”

 

Sophie sighed as her hiccups stopped. “I know Mom; you were only trying to help.”

 

There lay a peaceful silence between them before Sophie broke in.

 

“Mom… what do I do about Logan?” 

 

Her mother thought while she idly stroked Sophie’s hair in a soothing pattern. “I suggest you give him time and let the fact sink in. He’ll probably just yell at you if you go to him now with apologies.”

 

She glanced at the necklace which still was clenched in Sophie’s hand. “The boy really loves you, he’ll understand as time progresses.”

 

Sophie nodded as she agreed with her mother for the first time.

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On March 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I feel sorry for Sophie aww and her mother Poor Logan..
On March 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I feel sorry for Sophie aww
On February 3rd 2008 dancerbabe16 Said :
dancerbabe16 ahhhh, kmp!
On February 3rd 2008 SaveTheSaved3 Said :
SaveTheSaved3 Screw Numbbbb0z because this part deserves every rate it gets. You obviously must be numb. Its great. I loved it.
On February 2nd 2008 rebeldork2 Said :
rebeldork2 luv it kmp plzz
On February 1st 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Accidental Love [Chapter 33]'s fate: Good, actually. From the get-go you could have sympathy for the way Sophie yelled at her mother, simply because she was guilty because of it. Teaches an important lesson, two actually; Don't lose your anger/Learn how to apologize. 36 votes as of the time of this critique, and it doesn't deserve that much. I was surprised, though. It seemed like this would be another cliche story about love, and this particular part seems like a good beginning to another story. It'd help if the dialogue (who said who, and with what emotion) were better, and if it had paragraphs instead of sentences. Makes it look more professional, and would look more like a novel than lines out of a conversation. Surprised me, really. *Curses Joe taking away the "Downvote" button*
On February 1st 2008 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 aww i love it. kmp.
On February 1st 2008 MarieInSpace Said :
MarieInSpace Brillant but it's depressing me. =(
On February 1st 2008 HipsterHanna Said :
HipsterHanna Skol isn't a word. It's s-c-h-o-o-l. And this is a very good one! I'm exactly that way with my mother. I'm never able to stay very mad for a long time.
On February 1st 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 omg she cant move...Logan needs to understand...i love it its so good sry i havent read them l8ly...skol is hectic and moms getting ready to have a baby...k.m.p.p
On February 1st 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 awwwww... kmp
On January 31st 2008 babydoll6789 Said :
babydoll6789 awww i hope they find someway to be together!..kmp
On January 31st 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX I love your story. Please keep me posted!
On January 30th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said :
ALICHELLA16 kmp please
On January 30th 2008 tibbskidoo Said :
tibbskidoo poor sophie...
On January 30th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen love it!!
keep me posted =]
On January 30th 2008 cursedxisxwhat Said :
cursedxisxwhat ahhhhhhhh no! suspension! kmp.
On January 30th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox kmpp.
On January 30th 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae moms suck. keep me posted
On January 30th 2008 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 love it
On January 30th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 this is really good i hope it works out between them. KMP plz
On January 30th 2008 taraluvsbama06 Said :
my picture
kmp please
On January 30th 2008 sexibabe2009 Said :
sexibabe2009 AWE! now i'm really hooked!!!
On January 30th 2008 makana96792 Said :
makana96792 Aww, keep me posted please i love this stor
On January 29th 2008 pellagirl933 Said :
pellagirl933 omg i really hope she doesn't move! keep me postd~