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This is a story about a very, very, very haunted house on very, very haunted hill in a very, very, very haunted town, you get the picture its haunted. It all started like this, “this is a story of a girl who cried a river and drowned the whole world.” “God Bill you know I hate that song.” “ Yeah but ever since that song came out its been stuck in my head and it wont go away. Its been what 10 yeas now and its still there I think something might be wrong with me do you think its serious?” “Yeah I do you might want to see a doctor, you could be very ill.” “What o my god I just thought it was normal am I going to die I need to call my mom” Dan exclaims while sobbing horrifically. “Hey calm down now I was just joking.” Dan wipes the tears off his face and turns to bill. “But you still might want to check into it… It’s just my opinion, do as you will.” Bill said indifferently to Dan.

What was said still affected Dan; he couldn’t let the thought go that something would be wrong with him. It’s only a song, what bad is that…? Dan thought to himself, walking to his house in the darkness of the town. Dan had left Bill’s house about an hour before, and jus before heading home he was at the Game Shop. “Some music won’t hurt will it…?” he said aloud to himself as he pulled out his iPod. Dan looked at it, and finally noticed it was the only song on his iPod. Dan stopped suddenly, and he wasn’t quite sure anymore, unsure if there was other songs on it before, or if he’d became so addicted to it that he couldn’t realize it was the only song he listened to.

“Man that kid I think there is something wrong with him.” Bill laughed out. “I know what ill do” he looked defiantly and turned on his super omega ultra superior gamming computer and when he did that the computer screen went blank and the began to blink. At first it blinked slowly but then faster and with more violent color. As bill watched his computer going haywire a beaming noise hit him and fell to the floor and passed out. The computer stopped and the screen turned on like normal. At that moment bill was vanishing as if he had been on a TV channel that was getting bad reception, then he was gone.

When Dan finally got home, his natural instinct was turning on his computer. But the odd thing was that the screen didn’t turn on like usual. Dan stared at the screen blankly, then suddenly felt very tired and overwhelmed. He hit the floor with a loud thud, he had blacked out. Dan then slowly faded; his body was turning into polygons, a 3D figure. Then he vanished.

When Bill came to, he found himself in his house again, but it was bare, nothing around. He looked around, and everything was 3D-like, he was in awe. Then Bill looked at himself, and noticed he too, was also 3D. “What the hell?!” Bill yelled out loud, he was quite shocked at this. He didn’t understand what happened at all. Bill moved around the building and found a couch, he sat lightly upon it, wasn’t quite sure if he could trust anything yet or not, because he was aware or video game triggers and the like.

Bill sat for a while trying to contemplate things that were happening. He suddenly got up and began to explore his new attire. He notice that he had a battle suit on, equip with a new age space helmet, heat sensors, high-tech com system, and super cool medic system. Next to him he found a rusty shovel… with a broken handle thing. Bill sat there for a while, thinking about the irony of it.

Suddenly he heard a crashing noise and then a great big mech worrier crashed through his house and was tearing it down but it wasn’t really his house just a lifeless version. “Man I’ve always wanted to ride one of these “ a voice from atop said. “Who’s up there? “ shouted Bill. Slowly the mech turned around and faced bill. “Dan is that you, how did you end up in my dream.”

It was Dan. "Well... anyways, hop in! It's pretty fun, I’ll let you control it.” he said as he moved over and let Bill jump in. "What’s your backup weapon if something happens?" Dan asked bill." "Well... " Bill started, then tossed the shovel out behind his back "I don't have one actually... what about you?" Bill asked looking at Dan "You don't seem to be fit with jus those raggedy clothes..." But then he was amazed at the next sight. "I have this" Dan replied, pulling out a high-velocity, 250 rounds machine gun. "Pretty spiffy yea?" Dan asked, knowing it was. They slowly moved across the land, watching all the other figures moving along the ground normally. Now and then they crushed a car underneath the feet of the mech.

“So do you know were we are” asked bill. “ What are you talking about this is my dream.” “ Wait you really think this is all a dream.” Well yeah I must have fallen asleep at my computer, lets see the last thing that happened was my computer started to flash guess I got bored and fell asleep.” “ I hate to be the one that’s telling you this but your not wearing any pants, and this isn’t a dream.”

Dan looked down. "Wow... what a damn shame..." he said, in a melancholic manner. "Sooo... I take it the same thing happened to you then Bill?" Dan asked. Bill nodded slightly. "How do you like my battle suit?..." Bill asked, quickly trying to change the subject. Dan looked at him "It's... alright... cool like the mech, yeah..." he agreed in a way.

Suddenly a EMP struck. "Awwwww man... I was jus having fun too." Bill said, waiting for the effects of the EMP to go away. "Uhh... you know Bill, that means there are enemies around..." Dan said. "Oh?" bill said curiously. Then they were blown to hell.

After 15 seconds they responded at base, which was Dan's house now.

They sat amazed looking at each other then both almost in unison let out a screaming F@#* “ o god that really hurt” bill yelled. “ Yeah I thought I was dead” then a loud echoing computer voice sounded over both “BILL DOWN TO 2 LIVES… DAN DOWN TO 1 LIFE UNTIL GAMEOVER” the both sat silently. "So did I start with more lives than you or what.” Bill said with a sarcastic voice. “ Well you see there was this girl..." Dan said then laughed. "Nah I’m kidding, I was killed.. Head shot... hell of a sniper I tell ya, but other than that, medic's were able to find me."

Bill looked at Dan "So... we are pretty good at this yes?" Dan agreed. "Jus... serious first person objective..." Bill concluded. Dan replied "Well an odd thing... there's this weird looking house on a tall firkin hill man... and it has base turrets... and that’s something that’s been killing our comrades... don’t know what’s up with it yet though." Bill glanced at Dan. "Your suggesting what? Why?" Bill asked. "I don't know... a way to get out of here?" Dan looked across the battlefield. Bill looked down the battlefield too.

“So this is a very tricky situation, what we’ll have to do is find as many people as you can we’ll meet up back here.” Dan said in a deep voice slowly cause sometimes he likes to say things like that to set a mood, a mood for some serious gaming. “Okay” bill replied in a silly low tone, “ so were is everyone, you said something earlier about comrades “ “ yeah I don’t really know where they went so I think its just us” Dan said even lower “ dammit” “ its okay here’s what were going to do”

 (I don’t remember what they said but this is how it happened)

Bill was riding a schwin bike with a laser gun attached to it strait up the hill miraculously dodging every bullet from the torrents but just then a great big huge Pillsbury dough boy his eyes full of anger and rage. There was nothing Bill could do but head right into the soft belly of 6the monster, and that’s exactly what he did, plunged right into his stomach and began to fire his laser. But it was no use for the great monster grabbed bill and swallowed him whole. The giant doughboy held his stomach let out a Bellowing laugh that shook the ground. The dough boy thought to himself, that kid kindda taste like spaghetti, just then the dough boys head went flying off from a super charged blast from a starfighter hovering above. The body of the doughboy quickly shrunk, and Bill's head was the only thing not covered, enabling him to at least breathe.

"Ha ha you looossseeerrr!" Dan yelled as he ran over, the turrets were firing at some other person, plus they found a ditch to hide in. "That was... weird?" Bill said, trying to get the marshmellowy substance off of him. "You will get used to it... it's been a few rounds hasn't it?" Dan asked. "Yeah it has... we need to try and get to the house up there... we are so close..." Bill pointed to the house as he spoke, then his hand got shot off by one of the mounted weapons upon the house. "Son of a...!!!" Dan said, he caught the hand, it wasn't all that bad. "Maybe it can heal...?" Dan said in a questioning manner. "Forget it, jus patch me so i dun bleed to death." Bill said, he grabbed a high-tech bazooka thing, aimed for two of the turrets and fired. In mid flight, one of the missiles was shot down, the other made it, but the turrets had some sort of force field. "Well I’ll be damned..." Bill said watching the missiles be deflected like they were chopsticks being broken in half (the wooden kind, super easy to break). "I have an idea!" Dan exclaimed "We can EMP them!!!" he said accidentally. "Wow... I never thought of that... wouldn't that disable them too?" Bill caught on to the idea quickly. Dan nodded. "It'd prolly give us enough time to get in if we time it right." he acknowledged the idea of Bill's.

At that they went back to base and formed a group of 5 or so men. "Ok!!" Dan shouted "You fine men have been chosen to help us on a mission, your objective: Distract the guns of the building upon that hill." he pointed to the building far away. "And then we." he pointed to himself and Bill. "Will EMP the building so we can infiltrate it." he finished with that. Seemingly none of the men had a problem with the plan. "This should be easy..." Bill whispered to Dan. Then all the sudden the other 3 soldiers ran off to the house, getting mowed down quickly. "Ok... maybe not..." Bill said regretting his first statement. Dan remarked "it's the first step to our process..." he smiled at that, knowing full well of what to do now.

Dan turned around and began to walk strait into the deadly field that lay before him. Bill didn’t notice at first but when he heard the incoming gunfire it became evident, “Dan what the hell are you doing you only have one life left!” (Almost at that instant a mortar landed right on top of Dan) A great cloud of dust arose and through the dust Bill could see that Dan was still standing. “ So what do you think you like my new armor?” Dan shouted. Bill was so astonished and still a little queasy from seeing his best friend blown to bits, “what… what is this how come you didn’t…” bill said in shock. “ Well you see I’ve figured it out.” “figured what out “ “ Why you have that song stuck in your head” “ This isn’t a time for jokes Dan what the hell is going on” Bill shouted with a hint a agitation. “ you still haven’t gotten it huh… ok I’ll just have to show you then.”  Dan walked out even farther this time right in the view of the high cannons and torrents, “what the hell!” Bill shouted this time running out to where he was. Before he could get there a bombardment fell upon Dan, which was throwing Bill back a considerable amount. Even though at that moment Bill was flying though the air there was something he had just now realized, that he hadn’t sung about that song this entire time, which was very weird for if you knew him he was always singing that song, always. So naturally he closed his eyes and began to sing softley, mind you that he was still flying through the air, “ This is a story of a girl,” the words echoed over everything as a soft tune, “ who cried a river and drowned the whole world.”

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