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So these are a couple of stories, and it would be great if you all could help me, and pick which one you like. Thanks =)
Creative Created on 6-30-09 Views(47) Story Rating G

Hidden Motives:

     As we were putting our stuff up Josh said, "Jess, do you think you should go on that date with Alex? I mean...he's kinda weird..." He was looking at Alex now and was scowling at him. "Yeah I mean, I know he's a little strange but so what? Why do you even care?" he looked back at me and shook his head then walked off. "Josh! Come back here and answer me." I said catching up to him. We turned a corner then walked out of the school.

      Once we got out of the school he finally turned around and looked furious. He pushed me up against the wall. He was scaring me. He's never been aggressive like this towards me. "Josh..." I whimpered. His face softened and he hugged me but didn't let me go. "Jessica..."

Invisible No More:

      I was walking down the hall, rushing because I had to get to my locker and back across the school in four minutes. Pushing through a huge crowd of kids who could care less about going to class. I was almost to my locker when I ran into someone. I fell over dropping all my stuff. "I'm sorry! Here let me help you." I heard a deep voice say. I'd know that voice anywhere. It's my crush of three years, Jason Poole. He's pretty popular. He has black hair and icy blue eyes, pale skin, muscles...about 5'9".

       Today he was dressed in black skinny jeans, a black shirt that clung to his body, converse and a lip ring. He smiled at me as he handed me my books. "T-thanks Jason." I stuttered. He smiled and asked, "You're welcome Emma, so do you want to hang out later?" He walked with me towards me locker. I stopped and looked at him confused. "What?" Jason asked looking just as confused. "well..you know my name...and you wantto hang out with Me...the girl no one even sees...are you doing some dare?" I asked tucking a piece of hair  behind my ear.

     Jason frowned then said, "Yes, I know you're name. You're an interesting person...all mysterious...and no...no prank....no dare...I really do want to hang out with you. You're way too pretty for a guy not to want to be with you."

The Winter Angel:

    She had porcelain skin, her nose and cheeks turning pink from the cold. Her stunning blue eyes seemed to twinkle. Her light blonde hair twirling around her as she spun and ran. She was like an angel. Her favorite season was the winter, which it was right now. She was a winter angel.

      She smiled at me, showing me her white teeth. Her delicate hand floated up and grabbed my own clumsy hand. I almost stopped breathing and was wondering why she would ever love me. I'm not worthy of her love. She dragged me toward a frozen pond. She stopped suddenly and seemed frozen. She looked at me sadly. With the most pained look I had ever seen. Then the tears started falling. "Andrew..." her voice was pained. "Andrew..I need to tell you something..."

Fake:

    "Why would I ever want to date you? I hate you with a passion Kyle."I spat at Kyle Snyder, the only guy that could ever make me this mad. "Because. Please Lola? I know everyone is bugging both of us about being single for so long." He begged. "Everyone knows we hate each other." I said.

        He looked at me with a puppy dog face. I sighed and mumble,d "Whatever." Kyle grinned and hugged me. I started to shove him off but all he did was hold me tighter. Then the strangest thing happened. I liked being in his arms. It almost felt as if he didn't want to let go.

Crystal Clear:

     "I was wondering if you'd like me to show you around?" I asked. Crystal smiled and said, "That would be great." "What's your next class?" "Biology with Mrs. Hernandez. "me too." we walked to biology and we quickly became friends.

     "To lunch madam?" I said bowing then holding my elbow out for her. Crystal giggled and nodded as she said, "Why thank you kind sir." She took my arm and we headed down to the lunch room.

      We sat down at my table, with our food and I said, "Everyone this is Crystal. Crystal, this is Erin, Julie, Linda, Arthus, Chris, Jeremy and Rodney." I looked around our table smiling and feeling great. Until I saw Chris looking at Crystal in a strange way.

Midnight Murder:

    "Miss Holloway, you must go downstairs soon. Your fiancee will be here soon." my maid Charlotte Bell told me as she was practically pulling me out of bed. "But Charlotte...I don't want to marry some guy I don't ever know. What if we don't like each other at all! I don't want a loveless marriage!" I cried out desperately as I sat up.

  Charlotte sighed and said, "Miss Holloway...no one wnats a loveless marriage, but Mr. Sharp is a great man. He's respected, handsome -" "A womanizer." I interrupted. Charlotte looked at me. "What? He is. Everyone knows it. I don't know why my parents insist I marry him." "Because his parents are very respected, wonderful, -" "Don't forget rich. It's all about the money." "Well, lets get you ready Miss Holloway." This is going to be a long night.

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On July 18th 2009 TwilightFan977 Said: 
TwilightFan977 Crystal Clear, Midnight Murder, and Invisible no more look intresting to me Hidden Motives seems a bit... I dont know. Like many other stories i've read before. So does Invisible no more (actually its like a story i wrote myself) but yeah i guess you can add that to the list too! So those are my suggestions ;) now its your job to pick one haha
On July 1st 2009 Mickey1378 Said: 
Mickey1378 hidden motives seems like a really cool story!!!
On June 30th 2009 JDilbeck101 Said: 
JDilbeck101 i like it