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Chapter Fourteen
Kamran’s POV
I was in a dark void for what seemed forever. When the black void finally disappeared it was replaced with a brightness. I was in a hospital again. I tried to sit up but then a intense pain came into my abdomen. "Whoa just lay back down Kamran. Don’t try to sit up. That would only make things worse." I look over to the voice, it was my dad. "Dad where’s Jalena?" I say quietly, I know some things wrong. "She’s with her mother and Alan, why?" I don’t say anything but I stand up, pain flows over me but I keep on going, "Take me to Alan’s room. Now." I say. My dad leads me to Alan’s room when we get there, I see Alan with a gun he’s pointing it at Jalena, and her mom. I burst into the room, and jump infront of Jalena. But instead of blacking out, I see my dad get shot instead. I sit down and ask my dad, "Why? Why did you do that dad?" My dad replies with a smile and small chuckle, "Because Kamran, I’ve already had my life, I accomplished many things in my life, I met a wonderful woman, I had a beautiful son, I’ve worked in many places, I just thought that since I lived my life already and your only 17 that I should be the one who loses my life first... I love you Kamran, I’ll say hi to your mom." Then my dad’s eyes close and he stops breathing. It’s a little strange how he died with a smile on his face, but at least he died happy. I broke down crying. Everythings going horrible, the only good thing is that Jalena is alive.
One week later
Alan died yesterday his funeral is tomorrow. My dad’s is today. Everyone’s crying, except me. I feel like I’ve cried myself dry. I couldn’t get the tears to come, everything went in slow motion for the entire funeral, I couldn’t hear anything that anyone was saying. I kept replaying the hospital scene in my head. I couldn’t do anything. I say everything but I couldn’t react to it. Finally when school came I went but didn’t think much about anything at school. The only person I could react to was Jalena. One rainy day I decided to walk home. Jalena was walking too. She was ahead of me. I yelled out her name, "Jalena!" She jumped and turned around. When she saw it was me she smiled, I smiled back. Then her smile disappeared. I heard a loud bang then next thing I knew, I saw Jalena on the side walk, bleeding. Possibly dead.
Comments
| On February 9th 2008 kikidoodle6 Said: |
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| ahhh why does everyone have to get shot keep writing i wanna know what happens kmp! |
| On February 9th 2008 MiracleDay Said: |
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| if alans dead whos shoting now???????? ahhhh!!! so confused!!! ... kmp |


