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Created on 12-31-69

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On March 19th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said :

	True enough. I kind of got tired and needed to finish because of it being due but had I the time, I'd've elaborated.

On March 19th 2008 chayeah22 Said :

	It was very good, I liked the concept but I do think you could have bulked up the ending a little more. Like have the reactions of his friends or something along those lines. (unless there is a specific word count) But I enjoyed it a lot.

On March 19th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said :

	PLEASE tell me there's a gamer somewhere around here who is amused by the horses' names.

On March 19th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said :

	The premise was that the government had decided that all freckled people were possessed and were to be rounded up, tortured, and killed.

On March 19th 2008 brokenwings122 Said :

	What exactly was the premise for this story? I think more details as far as description of places and people would improve it, but very good.