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Diary of a unborn child

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Created on 4-21-07

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Month One
Mommy
I am only 4 inches long
but I have all my organs.
I love the sound of your voice.
The sound of your heart beat
is my favorite lullaby.

Month Two

Mommy
today I learned how to suck my thumb.
If you could see me
you could definitely tell that I am a baby.
I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though.
It is so nice and warm in here.

Month Three

You know what Mommy
I'm a boy!!
I hope that makes you happy.
I always want you to be happy.
I don't like it when you cry.
You sound so sad.
It makes me sad too
and I cry with you even though
you can't hear me.

Month Four

Mommy
my hair is starting to grow.
It is very short and fine
but I will have a lot of it.
I spend a lot of my time exercising.
I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes
and stretch my arms and legs.
I am becoming quite good at it too.

Month Five

You went to the doctor today.
Mommy, he lied to you.
He said that I'm not a baby.
I am a baby Mommy, your baby.
I think and feel.
Mommy, what's abortion?

Month Six

I can hear that doctor again.
I don't like him.
He seems cold and heartless.
Something is intruding my home.
The doctor called it a needle.
Mommy what is it? It burns!
Please make him stop!
I can't get away from it!
Mommy! HELP me!

Month Seven

Mommy
I am okay.
I am in Jesus's arms.
He is holding me.
He told me about abortion.
Why didn't you want me Mommy?

Every Abortion Is Just . . .

One more heart that was stopped.
Two more eyes that will never see.
Two more hands that will never touch.
Two more legs that will never run.
One more mouth that will never speak.

Keep this in mind befor you take that life this could be the child God sent to find a cure for cancer,aids or even to bring world peace will you still destroy that.Life is started the moment you concieve

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On June 4th 2008 Buttafooka Said :

	Epic Fail

On April 26th 2008 quizgirlton Said :

	THat's sooooo sad

On April 20th 2008 missmadisings Said :

	you know what? abortion is not such a horrible thing and people that are like "oh you got an abortion? well now you're just a slut and i hate you" should realize that for some girls its the only choice. do you realize that some of these babies were concived through rape? maybe the condom fell off. maybe the girl needed the money. think through all the possibilities before judging.

On March 27th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :

	IF YOUR GONNA GET A ABORTiON YOU SHOULDA JUS LEFT YOUR LEGS CLOSED AND NOT BE A HOEE.

On March 19th 2008 sappanator Said :

	i really think that girls shouldnt have an abortion b/c that is very wrong and if they didnt want a child they shouldnt of laid there and got pregnant..

On March 13th 2008 shadyishott Said :

	i hate abortion its bad and.........well BADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Y_Y

On January 25th 2008 DaKay Said :

	Abortion is just wrong. But some people HAVE to do it. Some for the sake of their lives. And for others, they have their reasons.

On January 22nd 2008 xzcx Said :

	i think it is very wrong if they do not want the baby do not do the deed how could doctors say that there is no baby it was so sad nobody has the right to just take a persons life away if you do not want it at least give it the chance to live put it up for adoption!give the baby a life

On January 14th 2008 Han0Liv Said :

	this story really touched me! I just had a beautiful baby girl and I could not imagine my world without her! people that believe in abortion should have been aborted!

On January 8th 2008 mrsalfonso Said :

	i am tears.. that was so sad

On January 6th 2008 pellagirl933 Said :

	i think abortion is wrong! i really love this story!

On January 3rd 2008 abbyz11w Said :

	abortion is wrong, it doesnt give, waht may be the best scientist in the world or the persopn who cures cancer, a chance to liev!

On December 29th 2007 max5892 Said :

	this is really good...sad..this is a great way to get your message across, even though i dont necessarily agree with you about abortions :\

On December 11th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	that is sooo sad! OMG! My birth ma tried to use drugs to get rid of me...but here i am!

On October 12th 2007 rcgrl4lyf Said :

	i really like this i know someone who got 2 aBORTIONS AND I THINK ITS VERY WRONG

On October 11th 2007 kkpixiexx Said :

	hmmm i dont think abortion is always the best choice but then agen wot about the women who are raped and fall pregnant? What about teens who get pregnant and cant look after the child??? It seem inhumane but sometimes its the only way...

On September 24th 2007 emohairlove Said :

	i dont think abortion is right..but think about the teens who get pregnant and wont be able to take care of them..and have to go through school... i thought i was pregnant last year when i was in 7th grade...i would have never been able to make it through school if i was pregnant...

On September 13th 2007 haylesrox Said :

	i totally agree. i am totally against abortion. it so mean. just coz the people cant hera the baby speak doesnt mean anything

On August 21st 2007 InvisibleFlame Said :

	Oh that was sooo powerful. I, too, am totally against abortion. As I was reading your poem, I was scared that this ending was going to happen. You are a very good writer, I got chills reading this, thinking that this happens all the time.

On August 19th 2007 jesusfreakaka Said :

	This is very powerful. I am anti-abortion to the max! This seems even good enough to publish as a short poem or something close. Ever thought about it? You should. It is very touching.

On August 17th 2007 halfpint21106 Said :

	This is so sad I don't approve of abortion as a means of birth control like so many of the women these days are relying on it for just that... I could personally never do it. I lost my son at 2 days old and I would give my own life for him to be able to live a life that he was never given the chance to have.. I wish that women would consider adoption rather than abortion... A baby has no rights unfortanatly until its born and that is really sad...

On June 27th 2007 caripela Said :

	I THINK ITS UNFAIR TO JUDGE PEOPLE...DO YOU WEAR ANY DIAMONDS..WELL GUESS HOW MANY FAMILYS ARE BEING KILLED FOR YOU TO LOOK FABOULUS WITH YOUR BLING BLING..EVER THINK WHERE MOST OF YOUR HOME SUPPLYS ARE BEING MADE??? OR WHO MAKES THEM??? EVERYONE HAS THE RIGHT TO DO AS THEY PLEASE WITH THERE OWN BODYS...THIS IS AMERICA RIGHT OR WRONG..THERES BETTER THINGS TO WORRY ABOUT THEN SOMEONE ELSES PERSONAL CHOICE SOMETHING ONLY ONESELF AND GOD CAN DISCUSS LATER..NOT YOU..WELL UNLESS YOU ARE GOD.....

On June 22nd 2007 Khmerfriendz Said :

	wow.

On June 21st 2007 JWalker2406 Said :

	This is so sad but very true. If you don't want the child put it up for adoption, there are millions out there who can't have a child. It's sad and sick. But anyways I love you story!

On June 9th 2007 manda36274 Said :

	I REALLY DON'T BELIEVE IN ABORTION. I HAVE HAD A CHILD DIE ON ME AND I JUST CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHY A PERSON COULD KILL A CHILD... IF YOU DON'T WANT A CHILD, GIVE IT TO THOSE WHO CAN'T HAVE A CHILD...

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